Topic: Moving On
sweetcountrygirl's photo
Tue 10/17/06 01:12 AM
Your anger is a tornado destroying everything in your path,
Your words tear at me like a violent wind blowing against my breast
the pain I feel is a sweet release because I have longed to feel
something, anything, in this cold, cold house,
darkness closes in like a heavy blanket of dew,
I pray for joy, I pray for light, I pray for you,
Then the sun rises and takes her plight
I rise from my knees, a smile on my face,
and rejoice because I have no choice,
My prayer has been answered, and light shines through,
darkness is gone and all things are new,
Another day is granted, so I'll take what's left,
and continue to trust that "You" know what's best...

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Tue 10/17/06 01:21 AM
you've held your breath through the darkness
and i was the night
you seeked refuge in the realms of lonliness
but i was the shadows passing by
i held you in your dreams,though you never asked me to
and now i only hope to someday awake with you
my silent eyes awake to the night
and im left alone to face these times in my life
a beautiful dream,she stood in the light
my hands reach for her body..........to only feel the night

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Tue 10/17/06 01:47 AM
Beautiful JT

ptjoker's photo
Tue 10/17/06 05:35 AM
wow, those both sound amazing. Keep it up

TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 10/17/06 06:51 AM
Not only amazing but fit together like a puzzle.

Jimi366's photo
Tue 10/17/06 11:40 AM
You're right that the two poems fit together.
They are both beautiful and I like the dark tones
that both have.

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Tue 10/17/06 10:41 PM
cool!!!!!!!