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The Instrument
She screamed “Don’t!” just before the uncontrollable moan escaped from the depths of her desires “Don’t stop . . . please don’t stop” She was like an instrument and I the musician gently biting her inner thigh as she moved to the rhythm of each soft gentle toying kiss The heat of her passion was as warm as the candle’s flickering flame as our moving shadows danced with midnight’s light entwined so that they resembled one soul As I travelled the distance of her stomach to her breast to her neck and to her lips she held me as if I was her breath her beating heart she held me as I was more than just her lover Our bodies began to mimic the shadows that decorated the room rhythmically moving as fluidly as the ocean’s waves just before the storm slowly before gradually intensifying as the winds of passion brings the elegance of the storm’s fury until we are drenched in silence shivering from the cool air that has washed over our souls |
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mig.. truly you have a very stirring piece here. WOW! I have lost my spark of late until seeing and feeling this... you are indeed "the master" of inspiration...
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mig.. truly you have a very stirring piece here. WOW! I have lost my spark of late until seeing and feeling this... you are indeed "the master" of inspiration... Athena you and these other wonderful poets/authors truly inspire me. Thank you very very much for the kind words and inspiration |
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Bravo!
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I feel like I need a cigar. |
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...and i..need a coffee...mig25.,how could you!..do you really have to rub it in?..i mean ive been "without" for quite some time now and it's fine really..then you go and post something like this...arrgghh!..(fyi, it's winter and raining here..you get the picture?)
I love this, mig25, you cut through me with this and made me realize that loving is really beautiful....kudos! |
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Hot write.....
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mig25...i like,& i like the title.
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Wish I had found this before I went to bed last night...
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nice writing! Keep up the great work!
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i'm jealous, great work. my advice is to somehow work your phone number into the poem.
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...and i..need a coffee...mig25.,how could you!..do you really have to rub it in?..i mean ive been "without" for quite some time now and it's fine really..then you go and post something like this...arrgghh!..(fyi, it's winter and raining here..you get the picture?) I love this, mig25, you cut through me with this and made me realize that loving is really beautiful....kudos! Wow . . . I'm loving the responses I've received for this piece. It's nice and you know Kaleijoscope, I can imagine the cold rain slowly falling onto the souls of lovers as their bodies bring forth the warmth of a thousand suns. Hmm, I may have to write another poem like this one now |
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