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Edited by
DaySinner
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Mon 12/03/12 12:03 PM
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like a river rushing
toward a water fall there is a point of no return swim as you might you may try to fight but the water owns you i know I will not vanish i am indestructible an indispensable part of the whole therein lies excitement at what secret wonders i shall see! yet I may also lose myself all my memories even now do i truly remember who I once was? |
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I like this analogy, Sinner... once fate is accepted it flows all who go with it to the river of new realities, drowning out the past.. ...
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like a river rushing toward a water fall there is a point of no return swim as you might you may try to fight but the water owns you i know I will not vanish i am indestructible an indispensable part of the whole therein lies excitement at what secret wonders i shall see! yet I may also lose myself all my memories even now do i truly remember who I once was? Very nice . . . wow |
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thank you!
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Great write and, yes, really great metaphor.
I loved these lines. They were very strong - "swim as you might you may try to fight but the water owns you" |
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Immensely enjoyed!....
therein lies excitement at what secret wonders i shall see!  |
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nicely done.
and if i havent already, welcome... 
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