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Fri 11/23/12 03:13 AM
Darkest delirium
down the Pentecostal road
Not even a mile from sanity

A blood relative of obsession's whisky lips
Yet yours wouldn't even part for me

The moon ticked on
as sympathy's open arms forged chilly water
Brown faded blue eyes


and I
fell in love
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Fri 11/23/12 04:49 AM
Excellent write....smokin

Welcome to Poems & Creative Writing. waving
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Fri 11/23/12 06:55 AM
flowers :thumbsup:
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Fri 11/23/12 11:36 AM
Nice write and welcome..
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Tue 11/27/12 10:10 AM
blushing
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Tue 11/27/12 10:16 AM
So much said in so few words. This evokes pictures and music in my mind. So enjoyed.
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Tue 11/27/12 11:00 AM
Many thanks

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