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Topic: Untitled poem
CaitlinCalicoKitten Joined Thu 11/22/12 Posts: 39	Fri 11/23/12 03:13 AM
Darkest delirium down the Pentecostal road Not even a mile from sanity A blood relative of obsession's whisky lips Yet yours wouldn't even part for me The moon ticked on as sympathy's open arms forged chilly water Brown faded blue eyes and I fell in love

Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Fri 11/23/12 04:49 AM
Excellent write.... Welcome to Poems & Creative Writing.

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Fri 11/23/12 06:55 AM


Ainjel Joined Sat 01/24/09 Posts: 3610	Fri 11/23/12 11:36 AM
Nice write and welcome..

CaitlinCalicoKitten Joined Thu 11/22/12 Posts: 39	Tue 11/27/12 10:10 AM


Sharris Joined Sun 12/10/06 Posts: 7300	Tue 11/27/12 10:16 AM
So much said in so few words. This evokes pictures and music in my mind. So enjoyed.

CaitlinCalicoKitten Joined Thu 11/22/12 Posts: 39	Tue 11/27/12 11:00 AM
Many thanks

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