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Topic: ~ can't say goodbye
teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Fri 11/09/12 05:37 AM
she to he... you..the only one i make undrinkable coffee for he to she... you..the only one who uses my fork you make me think you make me feel you make me feel alive she,he love,unlove love looks love touches love words price of admission he,she unlove,love and can't say goodbye

Beej1618 Joined Fri 11/09/12 Posts: 4	Fri 11/09/12 06:05 AM
Lol. That is unfinished. First para was intriguing. Second para was from google. 5th para was revealing, but not substantiated. Give us more.....!!!!!!!!

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Fri 11/09/12 06:36 AM
Beej1618.....i appreciate your reading,your comments....the second para comment...i don't know of...they are the words i chose for the poem.teasingbrunette

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Fri 11/09/12 07:24 AM


Simonedemidova Joined Mon 11/15/10 Posts: 8952	Fri 11/09/12 09:28 AM
It was cool, I like the first part, what does price of admission mean?

Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Fri 11/09/12 10:16 AM
Two Soulmates in denial.....

Ainjel Joined Sat 01/24/09 Posts: 3610	Fri 11/09/12 06:56 PM
True TB style..Perfect as always with words..

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Sun 11/11/12 07:54 AM
tazzops.... Simonedemidova....to me it means.....in the relationship..the cost of... Up2Us...might be true Ainjel...generous,you!

Teditis Joined Sun 03/07/10 Posts: 3597	Tue 01/29/13 05:35 PM
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