Topic: why not
poppashroom's photo
Wed 11/07/12 02:10 PM
You plucked at my ear
As if a guitar string
You played my heart
As a harp

I wore my heart
On a sleeve
Sweet words
Now come sharp

You shed tears
Of bitter taste
A lemon zest
Of acid

Mill pond eyes
Emotionless mirror
Monstrous depths
Your lake placid

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Wed 11/07/12 03:21 PM
drinker :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

mig25's photo
Wed 11/07/12 04:04 PM
"You shed tears
Of bitter taste
A lemon zest
Of acid"

Now this is art!!!

Ladywind7's photo
Wed 11/07/12 04:43 PM
That lochness monster can be a cow at times.bigsmile nice write

Simonedemidova's photo
Wed 11/07/12 04:51 PM
Beautifully transitions.

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Wed 11/07/12 05:55 PM
Nice write Shroom..

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Wed 11/07/12 07:20 PM
Smooth....drinker smokin

Cutiepieforyou's photo
Wed 11/07/12 07:28 PM
flowerforyou

poppashroom's photo
Wed 11/07/12 10:05 PM
Thank you all, thought I'd come play