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So much hurt, so deep the pain
the words they fell as pouring rain two hearts so full, left now estranged with much to lose and nothing gained what is truth, reality we focus only on what we see faced with darkened destiny nature calls us, to be free I heard the words, I let them in I spoke my piece and yet again I heard them clear, again and then I looked beyond where we have been What I heard was let me go no desire left to know no more future here to grow only heartache yet to show forgiveness comes from deep within understanding rises, from the din opened eyes, reality sets in there will be no burden, asked again. |
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not an uncommon sentiment
unfortunately well written |
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Angst brings out the emotions eh?
Nice job :-) |
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So much hurt, so deep the pain the words they fell as pouring rain two hearts so full, left now estranged with much to lose and nothing gained what is truth, reality we focus only on what we see faced with darkened destiny nature calls us, to be free I heard the words, I let them in I spoke my piece and yet again I heard them clear, again and then I looked beyond where we have been What I heard was let me go no desire left to know no more future here to grow only heartache yet to show forgiveness comes from deep within understanding rises, from the din opened eyes, reality sets in there will be no burden, asked again. It's often said that writing is a journey into self discovery...For many, self discovery is the reason they write....Good for you! |
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Discovery.....yes
self....yea....not so much!!! Thank You All! |
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