Topic: No Burden
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Sat 11/03/12 11:21 AM
So much hurt, so deep the pain
the words they fell as pouring rain
two hearts so full, left now estranged
with much to lose and nothing gained

what is truth, reality
we focus only on what we see
faced with darkened destiny
nature calls us, to be free

I heard the words, I let them in
I spoke my piece and yet again
I heard them clear, again and then
I looked beyond where we have been

What I heard was let me go
no desire left to know
no more future here to grow
only heartache yet to show

forgiveness comes from deep within
understanding rises, from the din
opened eyes, reality sets in
there will be no burden, asked again.

s1owhand's photo
Sat 11/03/12 12:24 PM
not an uncommon sentiment
unfortunately
well written

drinker

soufiehere's photo
Sat 11/03/12 12:28 PM
Angst brings out the emotions eh?
Nice job :-)


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Sat 11/03/12 01:46 PM

So much hurt, so deep the pain
the words they fell as pouring rain
two hearts so full, left now estranged
with much to lose and nothing gained

what is truth, reality
we focus only on what we see
faced with darkened destiny
nature calls us, to be free

I heard the words, I let them in
I spoke my piece and yet again
I heard them clear, again and then
I looked beyond where we have been

What I heard was let me go
no desire left to know
no more future here to grow
only heartache yet to show

forgiveness comes from deep within
understanding rises, from the din
opened eyes, reality sets in
there will be no burden, asked again.



It's often said that writing is a journey into self discovery...For many, self discovery is the reason they write....Good for you!flowerforyou

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Sat 11/03/12 02:23 PM
Discovery.....yes
self....yea....not so much!!!

Thank You All!

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Sat 11/03/12 05:11 PM
drinker :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: