Topic: i'm getting bored with rainy days | |
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all i ever wanted was the world to be my friend
and be a ghost and love the living until they were all dead so open the plastic bottle, liquor, vodka, drive your car to california i'm getting bored with rainy days and somewhere sleeping in the park tonight is one more writer from 100 words a minute, back down to hundred proof and next to him are all his journals none of them in order he'll burn them all, the past is no more use my life is government approved and taxed so just relax the money's just so many faces i will never know so when i hand the death dealer my dollar i'm sure he understands my memory of him is first to go and somewhere in the dirt i'm sure that there are spiders eating up the autumn remnants she calls her parents and i'm embarassed as i drink the last of the cider October is over and i'm just getting older so i'll mail in my debts and better yet just maybe be a writer and somewhere sleeping in the park there's just another drunk turned shy to goth then thug to punk still sitting in the dark and somewhere sleeping in the park's another author and she's somebody's everything and even someone's daughter we just broke each of our best pens tonight |
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"i like that"
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ok, i like the way this one moves along.
yet, it has a relaxed feeling. sort of matter of fact, (i like that.) well done... |
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very timely...very pp...bare..honest..human.
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pretty niffty catchy and yet swell. but sad in a sense. nice write
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Make a cool song..Love this PP..
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Enjoyed this
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i liked this one too. :)
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I'm happy to see you sharing your writing here again.
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like it....times three
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