Topic: A knight in love
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Mon 10/16/06 06:54 PM
Lost for words as I look into your eyes
I can't live a single moment without you
finally it's easy to realize,but it's still
hard to believe that you feel like i do
Now you come to me like an angel,
I've desperately prayed for you each night
and now these dreams shall carry on forever..
you are the heaven in my eyes


i'll be your knight in shining armour
i'll fight and die for your hand
i am your prince of steel,standing forever
we will never be alone again


there are so many things that i just need to say to you
if only i could find the words
to describe the feelings i feel when im with you
and how you've taken away the hurt
you are the ray of sunlight i never thought i would find
you are the guiding light that i swear would always leave me behind


I'll be your knight in shining armour
and i will fight and die for your hand
for this knight in love will stand for love
if thats all I was made to do..........
but the greatest weakness i know is this endless need
for you


sweetcountrygirl's photo
Mon 10/16/06 09:50 PM
The only thought that came to my mind was beautiful...
and..
King Arthur...

JT...thanks...

you are very talented...

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Mon 10/16/06 10:01 PM
thank you sweetcountrygirl,i hope to maybe write with you someday

Jackinthegreen's photo
Wed 04/22/09 08:54 AM
Hey there JT. I know I aint as pretty as sweetcountrygirl laugh LOL. but I have a co writter proposal for ya.
From the way it's written it appears to be structured more like a song lyric than a poem. I was thinkin that with some carefull and creative collaboration we could turn it into a pretty decent country song. It probably would'nt take very long for me to make a cd demo to pass along to you to see if you like it and share with your friends. I hope I'm not breaching etiquette but if you're interested I'd preffer that you contact me at my personal e mail
metalhoresman at yahoo. I hope to hear from ya soon bud.