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Topic: The Wind
4630 Joined Wed 10/14/09 Posts: 9	Thu 10/04/12 09:46 AM Edited by 4630 on Thu 10/04/12 09:50 AM
When the Poplar tree bends in the wind I think of you As Autumn leaves fall Ten cycles to the ground I think of you The chill in the air On the Ozark hillside Tells me You didn't mean to You didn't mean to die On a windy day The day will come When I won't think of you But my heart will beat its last And the wind will never blow again

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Thu 10/04/12 09:52 AM


Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Thu 10/04/12 01:12 PM
This read like the weeping, aching willow.

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Thu 10/04/12 01:55 PM
When the Poplar tree bends in the wind I think of you As Autumn leaves fall Ten cycles to the ground I think of you The chill in the air On the Ozark hillside Tells me You didn't mean to You didn't mean to die On a windy day The day will come When I won't think of you But my heart will beat its last And the wind will never blow again Eternal love...this is beyond beautiful

PacificStar48 Joined Tue 10/02/07 Posts: 13764	Thu 10/04/12 04:54 PM
You sure put down some of my feelings to a "T". Very well done.

Sharris Joined Sun 12/10/06 Posts: 7300	Thu 10/04/12 06:23 PM
"The wind blows where it will and you do not know where it comes from" a tender writing, helpless emotion.

4630 Joined Wed 10/14/09 Posts: 9	Thu 10/04/12 09:24 PM
Thank you.

4630 Joined Wed 10/14/09 Posts: 9	Thu 10/04/12 09:25 PM
Thank you.

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Fri 10/05/12 04:59 AM
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