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Topic: YOU are the one!
Simonedemidova Joined Mon 11/15/10 Posts: 8952	Tue 10/02/12 07:46 PM
You You You So many things to say What you wanted to present And what you really want to portray A question mark looms in my mind I think I recall all the conversations As my heart starts to sink Long hours and hard drives Excitement and anxiety Of who you are today Maybe one who proposes or Just one who sends me away Walking on eggshells my mind starts to wander I wonder who's been drinking Why should I have to ponder It's more work to keep you then to send you on your way But today, TOday Today I take a stand to live my own way Love yourself and love your money But today IS not about you HONEY I am strong and deserve better so I leave you with this letter GOODBYE You lonely soul Hide your money in a hole Take your heart and burn it Take your lonliness, Youve earned it! EFF_OFF!

Ainjel Joined Sat 01/24/09 Posts: 3610	Tue 10/02/12 08:20 PM
Awesome..

AndyBgood Joined Thu 12/25/08 Posts: 12437	Tue 10/02/12 08:22 PM
Wow, you didn't just go through a break up did you?

Simonedemidova Joined Mon 11/15/10 Posts: 8952	Tue 10/02/12 08:22 PM
Thank You Ainjel!

Simonedemidova Joined Mon 11/15/10 Posts: 8952	Tue 10/02/12 08:23 PM
Wow, you didn't just go through a break up did you? HAHA< ya think?

AndyBgood Joined Thu 12/25/08 Posts: 12437	Tue 10/02/12 08:41 PM
Esplains why we had no firepit this summer!

Simonedemidova Joined Mon 11/15/10 Posts: 8952	Tue 10/02/12 09:04 PM
actually that has nothing to do with it. this was a disgruntle between a few of my friends and I could not bring them together because I felt uneasy about it.

Sharris Joined Sun 12/10/06 Posts: 7300	Tue 10/02/12 09:16 PM
Succinctly stated. Sometimes it takes a while to convince ourselves.

Simonedemidova Joined Mon 11/15/10 Posts: 8952	Tue 10/02/12 09:18 PM Edited by Simonedemidova on Tue 10/02/12 09:18 PM
Succinctly stated. Sometimes it takes a while to convince ourselves. Amen sister!Its hard to admit our own mistakes.

AndyBgood Joined Thu 12/25/08 Posts: 12437	Tue 10/02/12 10:10 PM
actually that has nothing to do with it. this was a disgruntle between a few of my friends and I could not bring them together because I felt uneasy about it. The best way to mess up a good thing, add other people!

Simonedemidova Joined Mon 11/15/10 Posts: 8952	Tue 10/02/12 10:12 PM Edited by Simonedemidova on Tue 10/02/12 10:13 PM
actually that has nothing to do with it. this was a disgruntle between a few of my friends and I could not bring them together because I felt uneasy about it. The best way to mess up a good thing, add other people! Haha, very true Andy, but everyone needs a sidekick.standing alone is just egotistical.

AndyBgood Joined Thu 12/25/08 Posts: 12437	Tue 10/02/12 10:15 PM
actually that has nothing to do with it. this was a disgruntle between a few of my friends and I could not bring them together because I felt uneasy about it. The best way to mess up a good thing, add other people! Haha, very true Andy, but everyone needs a sidekick.standing alone is just egotistical. Finding the right side kick is very important! How would Aqualad have fared as Batman's apprentice? Let alone how well would Robin have done under Aquaman or worst, SUPERMAN?

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Wed 10/03/12 03:20 AM


Simonedemidova Joined Mon 11/15/10 Posts: 8952	Wed 10/03/12 03:23 AM
actually that has nothing to do with it. this was a disgruntle between a few of my friends and I could not bring them together because I felt uneasy about it. The best way to mess up a good thing, add other people! Haha, very true Andy, but everyone needs a sidekick.standing alone is just egotistical. Finding the right side kick is very important! How would Aqualad have fared as Batman's apprentice? Let alone how well would Robin have done under Aquaman or worst, SUPERMAN? I know, exactly, the interview process is painful though.

Simonedemidova Joined Mon 11/15/10 Posts: 8952	Wed 10/03/12 09:04 AM
Thanks

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Thu 10/04/12 01:26 AM
Thanks You are welcomed.

Reicheru001 Joined Fri 08/24/12 Posts: 1	Sat 10/06/12 06:26 PM
Time flows freely Weaving an ever lasting web Thats never to be broken. Our hearts beat as if nothing ever mattered to us even though hearts do not belong to us alone Come flowering time unleash your wrath and separate me from my ever loving sweetheart forever more. His love confides in me yet do we not see that its all meaningless?

Simonedemidova Joined Mon 11/15/10 Posts: 8952	Mon 10/08/12 12:08 PM


pennyg281 Joined Thu 11/08/07 Posts: 4348	Mon 10/08/12 01:46 PM Edited by pennyg281 on Mon 10/08/12 01:50 PM
Hide your money in a hole Take your heart and burn it Take your lonliness, Youve earned it! EFF_OFF! My favorite part. :)

pennyg281 Joined Thu 11/08/07 Posts: 4348	Mon 10/08/12 01:48 PM
You You You So many things to say What you wanted to present And what you really want to portray A question mark looms in my mind I think I recall all the conversations As my heart starts to sink Long hours and hard drives Excitement and anxiety Of who you are today Maybe one who proposes or Just one who sends me away Walking on eggshells my mind starts to wander I wonder who's been drinking Why should I have to ponder It's more work to keep you then to send you on your way But today, TOday Today I take a stand to live my own way Love yourself and love your money But today IS not about you HONEY I am strong and deserve better so I leave you with this letter GOODBYE You lonely soul Hide your money in a hole Take your heart and burn it Take your lonliness, Youve earned it! EFF_OFF! I too have lived this and survived to llove again. Amazing write.