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Topic: }}} The sweetest smile
Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Sun 09/30/12 12:38 PM Edited by Ladywind7 on Sun 09/30/12 01:25 PM
Perceptive eyes faltered not. For better or worse.... the worse you certainly got. He gave you three, took one & still you were. Silence & Suffering, constant companions, made your bed with you. Youth passed by, the middle years never heard you

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Sun 09/30/12 12:56 PM
let escape one cry. Smothered, imprisoned he watched you die. His daily alcohol delirium never noticed your secret that lived inside. You were spoken for by angels, who sang melodies. Joyous glories comforted your maladies. Sweet smile eternal. Godspeed

Scotti71 Joined Fri 07/13/12 Posts: 173	Sun 09/30/12 02:06 PM
Such a beautiful poem about the sweetest,gentlest woman from the most caring woman I know

oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Sun 09/30/12 02:07 PM
Nice.

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Sun 09/30/12 03:23 PM
Such a beautiful poem about the sweetest,gentlest woman from the most caring woman I know Be strong, be courageous, for yet one more >>> death has lost its sting. Hallelujah!

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Sun 09/30/12 03:27 PM
Nice. Thank you for your prayers, support and the comment, my friend.

oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Sun 09/30/12 03:47 PM
Thanks for your thanks!

Sharris Joined Sun 12/10/06 Posts: 7300	Sun 09/30/12 04:27 PM
Such a beautiful poem about the sweetest,gentlest woman from the most caring woman I know Be strong, be courageous, for yet one more >>> death has lost its sting. Hallelujah! Lest we forget...a tender one...beautiful

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Sun 09/30/12 06:15 PM
Thank you Sharris.

poppashroom Joined Tue 06/28/11 Posts: 425	Mon 10/01/12 08:17 AM
My sentiments

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Mon 10/01/12 10:18 AM


Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Mon 10/01/12 11:45 AM
Thanks. A quick 5 min release of emotion on my mobile. A poem I will recreate one day with more time.

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