Topic: Pricked
Sharris's photo
Sun 09/23/12 09:36 PM
Pricked

Self proclaimed
giver of grandiose implosions
leaving life motionless
preserved in its unrelieved cacophony...
In your face, in everyone's face.

Coffined beneath articulated verbiage
honed denial,
spurious apology lacking remorse
a bleached perspective
sheeting in the wind
as you parade in your faux innocence,
draped across your heart.

You cannot fool the child
standing amidst the heap of hoarded piles
you call...treasures
walking through steeped gutted pathways
holding on to disappearing hand rails.
Blindfolded, blindsided
hearing only your rant.

No. The child grows truth.
A rose that cannot be denied.
Tears that stain the hand crimson when...
pricked.

SadieLu 12.


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Mon 09/24/12 04:02 AM
Have missed you and your writes dear Sadie.. :heart: ..

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Mon 09/24/12 04:32 AM
Such heartache when need becomes obsolete and can only be replaced with anger...The art of survival...A bad deal for both mother and child....Penetrating, pointed expression Sadie...You amaze!!...flowerforyou

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Mon 09/24/12 04:41 AM
flowers flowers flowers

Sharris's photo
Mon 09/24/12 06:01 AM

Have missed you and your writes dear Sadie.. :heart: ..

I thank you. I am happy to be here, for I miss you as well.

Sharris's photo
Mon 09/24/12 06:02 AM

Such heartache when need becomes obsolete and can only be replaced with anger...The art of survival...A bad deal for both mother and child....Penetrating, pointed expression Sadie...You amaze!!...flowerforyou

Thank you, your kind observation is welcomed in whole.

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Mon 09/24/12 06:03 AM

flowers flowers flowers

Jeff, sweet thank you.

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Mon 09/24/12 03:13 PM
very nice...flowerforyou

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Mon 09/24/12 03:46 PM
awwwwww.....thankyou,teasingbrunette

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Mon 09/24/12 07:17 PM
Excellent write....flowerforyou smokin

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Mon 09/24/12 08:43 PM
excellent write

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Tue 09/25/12 04:16 PM
always amazing, always so honored to read you! flowerforyou

Sharris's photo
Tue 09/25/12 05:15 PM

always amazing, always so honored to read you! flowerforyou

You are kind to this woman. So very cherished, my friends here.