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Topic: Azreal's Gift
Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Thu 09/13/12 09:16 PM Edited by Ladywind7 on Thu 09/13/12 09:18 PM
Aching, slumping armchair siege. Worn defense, Citadels stagnant stance. Jumbled memories, motions, emotions. Yesterdays, yesteryears. Morphine madness pains. Drift, drifting, adrift. Jolted dreams! My sons, my sons are where? Weary,so,so weary, Closing my eyes. I see eyes, Are those eyes? Madness has mirth? Portend beyond glass. With sleight of hand he taps, rattles and unhinges, the window. Cold. quiet eyes fixate, Strong arm beckons. Terror numbs, Cows behind confusion. Fear snowballs, Chilling bones, chattering teeth. Alarm timely rings across failing face. Death blow raised high, accurate and true. Azraels' Gift steals anew, The last gasp,the last grasp Of armchair blues. Fallen, Beneath Pale Riders' eternal hooves.

Ainjel Joined Sat 01/24/09 Posts: 3610	Thu 09/13/12 10:20 PM
"LIKE"

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Thu 09/13/12 10:58 PM Edited by Ladywind7 on Thu 09/13/12 11:17 PM
Taku toto, taku manawa. My blood, my heart.

Ainjel Joined Sat 01/24/09 Posts: 3610	Thu 09/13/12 11:59 PM
Nice to see Te Reo and the beautiful meaning..

mig25 Joined Sun 08/10/08 Posts: 1539	Fri 09/14/12 12:01 AM
Very nice

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Fri 09/14/12 01:16 AM


Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Fri 09/14/12 05:03 AM
Awesome write.....

pennyg281 Joined Thu 11/08/07 Posts: 4348	Fri 09/14/12 05:12 AM
Nice write :)

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Fri 09/14/12 06:16 AM


poppashroom Joined Tue 06/28/11 Posts: 425	Fri 09/14/12 08:18 AM
Enjoyed

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Fri 09/14/12 12:07 PM
Thank you peeps. A hard write for me.

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Fri 09/14/12 12:59 PM


Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Fri 09/14/12 01:06 PM
You are precious 2kidsmum.

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Fri 09/14/12 03:45 PM
This reminded me of Amado Nervo's version of Azrael...Amado was a poet and diplomat who studied for the priesthood but ultimately abandoned it for writing...He was considered the most distinguished Mexican poet of the 19th and early 20th century... His version for you Ladywind.... Azrael, abre tu ala negra, y honda, cobíjeme su palio sin medida, y que a su abrigo bienechor se esconda la incurable tristeza de mi vida. Azrael, ángel bíblico, ángel fuerte, ángel de redención, ángel sombrío, ya es tiempo que consagres a la muerte mi cerebro sin luz: altar vacío… Azrael, mi esperanza es una enferma; ya tramonta mi fe; llegó el ocaso, ven, ahora es preciso que yo duerma… ¿Morir…, dormir…, dormir…? ¡Soñar acaso!

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Fri 09/14/12 04:55 PM
Interesting Leigh. I am about to train to go into a religious vocation. Poetry is my 3rd passion. I will enjoy the translated poem I am sure. The angel of death needs to take a vacation here... :-(

ShugahBee Joined Mon 07/23/12 Posts: 241	Fri 09/14/12 06:50 PM
that was very nice and very interesting

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Fri 09/14/12 06:57 PM


Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Fri 09/14/12 08:07 PM
that was very nice and very interesting ><>***

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Fri 09/14/12 08:11 PM
I hope thank you is appropriate lol.

harsh2019 Joined Tue 06/05/12 Posts: 314	Fri 09/14/12 08:56 PM
very very very nice i have a lot to learn im still learning from all of you how to write very sweet poem please write again soon :)