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Edited by
ShugahBee
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Mon 08/13/12 12:23 AM
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Droplets one by one by one fall like a soft spring rain on your bare skin, lingering there where once my kiss belonged. One by one they shimmer and glimmer, They cling relentlessly captivated by your beauty. As you beckon me over and over to come agian to your beckoncall. As One by One the memories sway with the softness of you in your purple lace. You call out to me Will you be mine, Will you be mine once more ? amongst your tears,silence almost fills the night with my quieted and empty reply, i can't ,I can't is my reply in the darkened night.Because Im lost within the petals of your lyes.Im tucked in the crevices of your deceit,Im mesmerised by the curve of your trance. As I lay upon your thorns with a scorn caloused heart. As the memories sway with a hint of your jasmine perfume. As I wait , I hope and I pray that one day the memories will fade like Droplets of a spring rain one by one by one. *´) ¸.•´¸•*¨) (¸.•´♥ ShugahBee* Blessings ƸӁƷ Harmony MSB©Copyright 2012 |
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Hey, I hope you are ok? Nice poem.
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Nice write....
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Wow...
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Oh girl!...Powerful lines!... "Because Im lost within the petals of your lyes.Im tucked in the crevices of your deceit,Im mesmerised by the curve of your trance." Loved it !! |
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Edited by
ShugahBee
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Mon 08/13/12 03:09 PM
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Hey, I hope you are ok? Nice poem. Thank you for asking Ladywind i'm doing very good I saw that photo and the words came to my mind . It's always nice to hear from you I hope you have a blessed day Thank you |
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Edited by
ShugahBee
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Mon 08/13/12 03:04 PM
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Thank you leigh
I'm glad you liked it. I was shy about posting it,Im glad I posted the photo right this time. its a little larger then i liked but it worked out.Your always so sweet Sweeteer then honey |
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Edited by
ShugahBee
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Mon 08/13/12 03:14 PM
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Thank you tazzops
it's nice to see your smile. Thank you Up2Us I'm not that great with words but i like to write soemtimes thank you. |
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keep writing,
interesting terms, some inspired |
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nice.very nice.
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this absolutely gave me chills, a truth bearing, soulful,
write, bravo Shuga!! |
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Thank you everyone means alot ,
I love to read others writings more then i like to do my own ,So many talented and great writers here but im learning and trying so thank you . I hope you have a blessed week and a great upcoming weekend |
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A beautiful write..
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Beautiful write. keep writing and please share more. :)
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its so hard sometimes ta get thru th past and not let it affect the future esp with trust issues and lies, beautifully written
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