Topic: Self Preservation
creativesoul's photo
Sun 08/12/12 07:11 PM
Edited by creativesoul on Sun 08/12/12 07:26 PM
Into the evening my thoughts they soon grew
Wishing and wondering that there were two
Instead of just one in this life of mine
Where do I turn for God's sake when blind
To what has been given and long since returned
Rejected by past comes a longing a burn
In this head of mine for what was once then
A wonderful feeling so tragic I am
To close the eyes on what could be grand

A walking away in mind and in heart
This self preservation that drove us apart
And keeps me alone where the muse she resides
If only in mind to keep this alive
This wording of mine I cannot soon claim
For without my hurt these words have no aim
No place of birth and nowhere to go
For eyes cannot see what words cannot show
Those things must be felt from within
The touching the sharing that life can't rescind

ShugahBee's photo
Sun 08/12/12 07:16 PM
flowerforyou A very good peom I liked how you worded it all .

pennyg281's photo
Sun 08/12/12 07:24 PM
Nice write:) flowerforyou

creativesoul's photo
Sun 08/12/12 07:27 PM
Edited by creativesoul on Sun 08/12/12 07:28 PM
Thank you both. I cannot take credit. The words are not mine. They do not belong to me. A very special lady once said it best... I am merely a conduit.

Kitkat0's photo
Sun 08/12/12 07:36 PM
Very touching!

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Sun 08/12/12 07:43 PM

Thank you both. I cannot take credit. The words are not mine. They do not belong to me. A very special lady once said it best... I am merely a conduit.


Well, who ever she is, she expresses her feelings very well:smile: ...Thank you for sharing Creativesoul!flowerforyou

creativesoul's photo
Mon 08/13/12 05:33 AM
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ArtGurl's photo
Fri 01/04/13 01:49 PM
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Xotic_Blue_Eyes's photo
Fri 01/04/13 08:05 PM
You got me thinking :-) nice poem

no photo
Sun 01/06/13 04:14 PM
I love a good "Song"
Thanks for sharing
:smile:

LAMom's photo
Mon 01/07/13 07:24 AM
Welcome home.. have missed you

I see the butterfly has once again touched your soul
flowerforyou