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Edited by
creativesoul
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Sun 08/12/12 07:26 PM
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Into the evening my thoughts they soon grew
Wishing and wondering that there were two Instead of just one in this life of mine Where do I turn for God's sake when blind To what has been given and long since returned Rejected by past comes a longing a burn In this head of mine for what was once then A wonderful feeling so tragic I am To close the eyes on what could be grand A walking away in mind and in heart This self preservation that drove us apart And keeps me alone where the muse she resides If only in mind to keep this alive This wording of mine I cannot soon claim For without my hurt these words have no aim No place of birth and nowhere to go For eyes cannot see what words cannot show Those things must be felt from within The touching the sharing that life can't rescind |
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A very good peom I liked how you worded it all .
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Nice write:)
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Edited by
creativesoul
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Sun 08/12/12 07:28 PM
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Thank you both. I cannot take credit. The words are not mine. They do not belong to me. A very special lady once said it best... I am merely a conduit.
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Very touching!
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Thank you both. I cannot take credit. The words are not mine. They do not belong to me. A very special lady once said it best... I am merely a conduit. Well, who ever she is, she expresses her feelings very well ...Thank you for sharing Creativesoul! |
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You got me thinking :-) nice poem
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I love a good "Song"
Thanks for sharing |
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Welcome home.. have missed you
I see the butterfly has once again touched your soul |
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