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Topic: True Beauty
Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Sat 08/11/12 11:31 PM
Abandoned, free, her hair gracefully flows, framing her raptured face. She sways and dream dances the numbness away. In her worship she reaches out her arms, touching heaven. Adoration, praise. pure love given & received. Hallelujah.

mig25 Joined Sun 08/10/08 Posts: 1539	Sun 08/12/12 12:35 AM
Abandoned, free, her hair gracefully flows, framing her raptured face. She sways and dream dances the numbness away. In her worship she reaches out her arms, touching heaven. Adoration, praise. pure love given & received. Hallelujah. Nice!!

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Sun 08/12/12 01:16 AM
Thank you ==<>==

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Sun 08/12/12 06:57 AM


Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Sun 08/12/12 08:21 AM
Abandoned, free, her hair gracefully flows, framing her raptured face. She sways and dream dances the numbness away. In her worship she reaches out her arms, touching heaven. Adoration, praise. pure love given & received. Hallelujah. Sincere! A quote for you... "He changed sunset into sunrise." ~Clement of Alexandria

oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Sun 08/12/12 08:24 AM
Nice poem. You always seem to string potent words together.

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Sun 08/12/12 01:11 PM
Thank you beautiful Leigh. That is a befitting quote :-)

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Sun 08/12/12 01:14 PM
I like your poetry Oldhippie. But you already know that. Thanks.

ShugahBee Joined Mon 07/23/12 Posts: 241	Sun 08/12/12 01:33 PM
That was very lovely I liked all of it.

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Sun 08/12/12 01:41 PM
That was very lovely I liked all of it. A woman at my church inspired me to capture her beauty as she worshipped. I was captivated.

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Thu 09/06/12 07:26 AM
so beautiful.when I close my eyes..and try really hard, I imagine my hands reaching to all the corners of the light.

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Thu 09/06/12 05:18 PM
Sistah......

poppashroom Joined Tue 06/28/11 Posts: 425	Thu 09/06/12 06:01 PM
Reading you is a moment in time

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Thu 09/06/12 10:35 PM
I do hope it is a good moment in time?

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