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Edited by
mig25
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Sat 08/11/12 03:30 AM
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Snuggling Under the Stars
The constant “Whoosh” sound flowed to and fro like music underneath a billion smiles The night was cool which was perfect for me since that gave me a reason to pull you just a little bit closer . . . you see, I really do love to snuggle And all that was left to do was listen to the waves and wish this moment never had to end |
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nice poem just last line of the last stanza can be wish this moment would never end or it can be wish this dream would never end other than that its nice
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nice poem just last line of the last stanza can be wish this moment would never end or it can be wish this dream would never end other than that its nice I agree . . . so I changed it. Thanks |
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No problem my friend and thanks for sharing it with us here :) have a nice day :)
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this too..appeals to my romantic side...verygood...
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Snuggling Under the Stars The constant “Whoosh” sound flowed to and fro like music underneath a billion smiles The night was cool which was perfect for me since that gave me a reason to pull you just a little bit closer . . . you see, I really do love to snuggle And all that was left to do was listen to the waves and wish this moment never had to end Memories... I can smell the sea air, feel his arms around me....Sigh.... Beautiful Mig! |
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thank you, a picture perfect moment with the moon broken only by the gentle rise of the tide.
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one of my favorite things to do, great visual mig!
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