Topic: Snuggling Under the Stars
mig25's photo
Sat 08/11/12 02:48 AM
Edited by mig25 on Sat 08/11/12 03:30 AM
Snuggling Under the Stars


The constant “Whoosh” sound
flowed to and fro
like music
underneath a billion smiles

The night was cool
which was perfect for me
since that gave me a reason
to pull you just a little bit closer . . . you see, I really do love to snuggle

And all that was left to do
was listen to the waves
and wish
this moment never had to end

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Sat 08/11/12 03:09 AM
nice poem just last line of the last stanza can be wish this moment would never end or it can be wish this dream would never end other than that its nice

mig25's photo
Sat 08/11/12 03:31 AM

nice poem just last line of the last stanza can be wish this moment would never end or it can be wish this dream would never end other than that its nice


I agree . . . so I changed it. Thanks

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Sat 08/11/12 04:05 AM
No problem my friend and thanks for sharing it with us here :) have a nice day :)

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Sat 08/11/12 05:53 AM
:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

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Sat 08/11/12 05:58 AM
this too..appeals to my romantic side...verygood...

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Sat 08/11/12 06:02 AM

Snuggling Under the Stars


The constant “Whoosh” sound
flowed to and fro
like music
underneath a billion smiles

The night was cool
which was perfect for me
since that gave me a reason
to pull you just a little bit closer . . . you see, I really do love to snuggle

And all that was left to do
was listen to the waves
and wish
this moment never had to end



Memories... I can smell the sea air, feel his arms around me....Sigh....

Beautiful Mig!flowerforyou

poppashroom's photo
Sat 08/11/12 07:17 AM
thank you, a picture perfect moment with the moon broken only by the gentle rise of the tide.

bastet126's photo
Sat 08/11/12 07:31 AM
one of my favorite things to do, great visual mig! flowerforyou