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Topic: Aftermath of falling in love...
RaghaBard Joined Wed 05/30/12 Posts: 55	Fri 06/29/12 12:26 AM
If a person is in love... Like water from the falls their feelings will flow... Like sun their face will glow... A minute away from their love will make them sad... And if that time exceeds they might become mad... The more they miss.., Will increase the time they kiss... And if their love starts to break... They would say that love is just a fake...

pennyg281 Joined Thu 11/08/07 Posts: 4348	Fri 06/29/12 12:35 AM
Nice write. Welcome to mingle.

RaghaBard Joined Wed 05/30/12 Posts: 55	Fri 06/29/12 01:35 AM
Thank you friend...

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Fri 06/29/12 06:41 AM
If a person is in love... Like water from the falls their feelings will flow... Like sun their face will glow... A minute away from their love will make them sad... And if that time exceeds they might become mad... The more they miss.., Will increase the time they kiss... And if their love starts to break... They would say that love is just a fake... A sweet "little" write that says something "big" about love.... Very nice...

RaghaBard Joined Wed 05/30/12 Posts: 55	Fri 06/29/12 09:03 AM
Thank you my friend...

mig25 Joined Sun 08/10/08 Posts: 1532	Mon 07/02/12 03:53 PM
Welcome . . . and nice poem

RaghaBard Joined Wed 05/30/12 Posts: 55	Tue 07/03/12 02:03 AM
Welcome . . . and nice poem Thank you my friend....

Kaleijoscope Joined Fri 10/15/10 Posts: 3319	Tue 07/17/12 08:43 PM
good write...thanks for sharing..

RaghaBard Joined Wed 05/30/12 Posts: 55	Wed 07/18/12 12:21 AM
good write...thanks for sharing.. Thank you my friend...

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