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Topic: The dead don't die
poppashroom's photo
Sat 06/23/12 10:40 AM
The sun broke through
as a breeze awoke
Taking your spirit
as if it were smoke
I closed my eyes
with one last tear
My hand closed yours
now you’re not here

A part of me left
painfully torn
Emotionless, empty,
now thoroughly worn
Ritual’s follow,
flowers to arrange
I look to my phone
knowing you’re out of range

I come to see you brother,
to hold your hand
cold and pale
like tide left sand
A rose lay upon you
now in full bloom
cast shadows upon you
as if lit by full moon

Time passes
you learn to heal
still questions of
why you God did steal
Tears are shed
questions asked
In my heart I know
that you have passed

I do know now
you’re not all but gone
you taught me well
your legend lives on
All you had said
all you had taught
I realize you grew in me
your deep in my thought

Times get tough
they get me down
I think of you
to shed my frown
My brother this is not
our final goodbye
My friend forever
the dead don't die

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Sat 06/23/12 11:50 AM
Beatiful....bittersweet..."Rituals follow, flowers to arrange"brokenheart

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Sat 06/23/12 11:53 AM
Edited by poppashroom on Sat 06/23/12 11:55 AM
Thankyou, Bastet helped me through this a year ago writing "Oceans Wave" for my friend. much love in this forum. So easy to express yourself here...flowerforyou


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Sat 06/23/12 08:02 PM
Very touching write.....brokenheart smokin

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Sun 06/24/12 02:23 AM
Thank you for reading, :thumbsup:

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Sun 06/24/12 10:30 AM
drinker :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

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Wed 06/27/12 01:11 AM
Beautiful..

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Wed 06/27/12 04:08 AM
Aww ! I feel so touched post reading it.
very nicely written

poppashroom's photo
Wed 06/27/12 09:49 AM
Thanks Tazz
Ainjel always good of you
Alpana glad you felt it

Cheers allflowerforyou

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Wed 06/27/12 01:55 PM
flowers flowers flowers

poppashroom's photo
Wed 06/27/12 02:34 PM

flowers flowers flowers

flowerforyou



bastet126's photo
Wed 06/27/12 04:28 PM
coming up on a year, a tribute, well done flowerforyou

poppashroom's photo
Thu 06/28/12 01:47 PM

coming up on a year, a tribute, well done flowerforyou


you helped, thank youflowerforyou

mig25's photo
Mon 07/02/12 03:55 PM
Speechless . . . poppa you definitely are a true poet

poppashroom's photo
Mon 07/02/12 05:43 PM

Speechless . . . poppa you definitely are a true poet


Kind words, thank you flowerforyou

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Thu 09/06/12 10:16 AM
Loved it.I hope when I am dead,I dont die.

poppashroom's photo
Thu 09/06/12 01:29 PM

Loved it.I hope when I am dead,I dont die.


A part of you will be left with all you have touched.

poppashroom's photo
Tue 05/17/16 11:29 PM
Coming on 5 years Bro. God bless

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Tue 05/17/16 11:58 PM
Beautiful poem, sad and touching:smile: we always shed tears for the lost of a loved one or someone special who have touched and left a mark in our lives. They maybe gone physically but the memory lives on in our hearts forever.:smile: happy

poppashroom's photo
Wed 05/18/16 12:19 AM
Thanks dolphin, words can't express loss, but words live forever, thanks

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