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The sun broke through
as a breeze awoke Taking your spirit as if it were smoke I closed my eyes with one last tear My hand closed yours now you’re not here A part of me left painfully torn Emotionless, empty, now thoroughly worn Ritual’s follow, flowers to arrange I look to my phone knowing you’re out of range I come to see you brother, to hold your hand cold and pale like tide left sand A rose lay upon you now in full bloom cast shadows upon you as if lit by full moon Time passes you learn to heal still questions of why you God did steal Tears are shed questions asked In my heart I know that you have passed I do know now you’re not all but gone you taught me well your legend lives on All you had said all you had taught I realize you grew in me your deep in my thought Times get tough they get me down I think of you to shed my frown My brother this is not our final goodbye My friend forever the dead don't die |
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Beatiful....bittersweet..."Rituals follow, flowers to arrange"
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Edited by
poppashroom
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Sat 06/23/12 11:55 AM
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Thankyou, Bastet helped me through this a year ago writing "Oceans Wave" for my friend. much love in this forum. So easy to express yourself here...
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Very touching write.....
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Thank you for reading,
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Beautiful..
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Aww ! I feel so touched post reading it.
very nicely written |
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Thanks Tazz
Ainjel always good of you Alpana glad you felt it Cheers all |
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coming up on a year, a tribute, well done
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coming up on a year, a tribute, well done you helped, thank you |
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Speechless . . . poppa you definitely are a true poet
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Speechless . . . poppa you definitely are a true poet Kind words, thank you |
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Loved it.I hope when I am dead,I dont die.
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Loved it.I hope when I am dead,I dont die. A part of you will be left with all you have touched. |
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Coming on 5 years Bro. God bless
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Beautiful poem, sad and touching we always shed tears for the lost of a loved one or someone special who have touched and left a mark in our lives. They maybe gone physically but the memory lives on in our hearts forever.
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Thanks dolphin, words can't express loss, but words live forever, thanks
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