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Setting sail into unchartered water
With you at my side, Winds sense you, my daughter. The sails billow their pleasure, puff out their pride, Pull at their ropes, eager to ride the tide. I watch you take firm control of the wheel. Fierce motivation,such youthful zeal! The mast of your backbone straight, erect, true. Your gaze, your laugh enthralls even the deep blue. The blue skies sun knows that you too do shine. I am humbled, yet proud to call you mine. |
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Beautiful write. I like your style. :)
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I enjoyed this
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Thank you Totage :-)
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Thank you Jemare.
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KC
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Beautiful write
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Thank you Penny. I dont always post, but I have enjoyed reading yours too.
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Thanks Tazz
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it felt very majestic, with honor and pride, loved it ladywind! :)
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Edited by
Ladywind7
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Mon 06/11/12 08:33 PM
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Thank you, I am beginning to think my style is romantic and macabre. Interesting mix!
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Little gems are the biggest finds.
This means so much now, I love it |
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Thank you gentlemen. Your comments & gifts are my reward for spinning my heart into words.
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That is one of my favorite songs. I never tire from hearing it. Thank you Up2Us
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Oh wow this is beautiful!
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for some reason this poem took me back in time and I pictured a giant white bird with crystal wings flying in the distance
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