Topic: What can I do to make it better? | |
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Hiya everyone!
So I was wondering what I could do to make my profile better where I can get people to not only look at it (That would be a good start, tee hee) but hopefully they would respond too :) Any advice? Amie |
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Less is sometimes more. Try shortening it to a paragraph or so, see if that helps. Add more pics. The ones you have up are great, they show your personality.
I'd maybe leave out the "b!tches" part, maybe use a better word. I find that word offensive and degrading, even in a playful context I don't think it's appropriate to use towards woman. I'm sure others feel the same way. That's more of a personal feeling though, nothing against you or anything. I just thought it may help to mention. Oh, and don't forget to offer free cookies for every response. :) |
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Less is sometimes more. Try shortening it to a paragraph or so, see if that helps. Add more pics. The ones you have up are great, they show your personality. I'd maybe leave out the "b!tches" part, maybe use a better word. I find that word offensive and degrading, even in a playful context I don't think it's appropriate to use towards woman. I'm sure others feel the same way. That's more of a personal feeling though, nothing against you or anything. I just thought it may help to mention. Oh, and don't forget to offer free cookies for every response. :) you are funny. lol. I am SOOOOO gonna put that on there, haha. |
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lol
Make sure you create a sense of urgency too like, "Hurry now while supplies last!". |
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BUHAHAHAHAHA!!!! Seriously rite? LMAO!!!
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I'd maybe leave out the "b!tches" part, maybe use a better word. I had the same thought. There's that and you could change your orientation to looking for a man, I would like your profile more then. |
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I'd maybe leave out the "b!tches" part, maybe use a better word. I had the same thought. There's that and you could change your orientation to looking for a man, I would like your profile more then. I took the B*tches out, its just how I talk to my girlz, it wasnt derrogatory, but its out now. And wht can I say about my orientation, I am bi....I think men are attractive but women, sigh...they are delicious....tee hee. |
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