hey everyone im new to the area and i want to share a poem i written over 10 years ago and i am a great song writer and poem so please be honest and open to share me thoughts of this, thank you. maybe one day if i were taken i could actually write my love and heart out for a woman.



Seashell

as i wake up to the sounds of the water
splashing against eachother, i wish that
she was here with me, but instead i am here alone
standing here in the cool breeze
no one to hold within my reach
this is such a beautiful beach

a single tear of pain fall from my eyes
no one here to hear my sweet cries
i think of love in my deepest thoughts
sometimes in my heart
it feels like a teasing mirage

the day she comes into my life
my pain of sadness will fade away
to rid me of my horid days

as the birds sing together
i fall in love with their melody
i wish she was here with me

but i feel like a lonely seashell
trapped on the bottom of the ocean floor
love is the most beautiful thing ever
that i could always adore









A Million Miles Away

(verse 1)

I think of you, all the time
you are so precious and so kind
a woman like you is hard to find
i only wish that you could be mine
why do people say that, finding love is blind?

(chorus)
i love your smile and your beautiful face
it feels like youre a million miles away
youre so far away, youre like a star in space
but it feels like youre a million miles away

(verse 2)
have i been in love before? no i have not
a chance with you is all i got
i need someone to hold my heart
to walk me out of this scary dark
lets take this love and turn it
into a piece of art

(chorus)

(bridge)
only your love could hold me
as my wounds of sadness are molding
for you love wont stop showing
kissing you with passion so slowly

(chorus)

Hi, are you asking us to critique or appreciate?

well honestly i do not mind, but go for it if you think it needs improvement. i love hearing thoughts so i can be a better writer.