Topic: Soul Song (inspired by jemare)
dmanjo's photo
Sun 05/13/12 06:10 AM


My soul it starts to sing a song
When it feels some kind of bond
Perhaps it knows that it is wrong
But it still needs to sing the song

My soul wants what the eyes can’t see
To sooth it in those times of need
To guide it with that forward speed
That helps the mind to intercede

My soul wants what the eyes can see
By complicating want for need
My eyes can see in front of me
My soul wants it to set me free

Contradictions are afflictions
In a world that’s full of fiction
Contemplating want for need
So very often won’t succeed

A soul that wants what it has seen
When what it needs not in the scene
A soul that needs no college dean
To tell it this is where it’s been

My soul it starts to sing a song
When it feels some kind of bond
Perhaps it knows that it is wrong
But it still needs to sing the song

jemare's photo
Sun 05/13/12 08:14 AM
blushing This is good and all of it from one line. I am very impressed. Now you need to add some music and you have a winner. Oh yea... I still use the notes you posted for part of my practice bigsmile