Topic: dead dreams
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Fri 04/20/12 08:32 PM
frustrated could i be more dissapoint in myself/ blocked from my lively dreams/ i hear cheers from everyoneself/ if dough they hear my sadden thoughts/ what left but to give up/ no hope/ when youre cut from your dreams/ i look big in the mirror/ but small in the inside/ i hold tears in/ i dont what it to effect my pride/ but there just before my dreams again/ sceem/ people and curses/ like a brick wall/ theyre throwing gorfer dust/ out of their purses/ dreams/ but life with no reverses

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Sun 04/22/12 01:16 AM
The first time I read this I thought it was a complicated piece that was trying to say something deeper than my thoughts wanted to go. Now, after reading it again, it actually takes my thoughts to that deep place. I like it.

Welcome and look forward to reading more of your work