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Topic: Seventh Sense
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Thu 04/19/12 05:22 PM
Can you hear me now?
No, because I don't exist;
"I think, therefore I think I'm not"
Cartesian circles retrograding
Escalating....

Tinfoil hats deflecting sensors
Hang the hangers from the ceiling
The dataghosts receive no signals
There's nothing there to trip the wires
Enervating....

Like sensory underload for the masses
A frozen, silent crash-n-burn
No molecular movement at absolute zero
Just a sense of unsenseness, end of the line
Ever waiting....?

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Fri 04/20/12 02:01 AM
The existance of non-existance. :) nice write Lex
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Fri 04/20/12 06:55 AM
To me the "sixth sense" is a know

I was curious to the seventh:wink:

Philospophic and Exhaustingflowerforyou

Almost foolish to say, "nice write"blushing

You most certainly are at another level Lexhappy
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Fri 04/20/12 07:06 AM
absolutely..Loved it(((((SexyLexy))))))
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Sat 04/21/12 02:09 PM
Lex, your writes always seem to add to my vocabulary happy My new word for the day: enervating. drinker <<< a Pepsi for you :wink:

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