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Topic: what will remain?
insangel Joined Thu 11/03/11 Posts: 258	Tue 04/03/12 05:20 PM
when it is the end of my play will anything of me remain? a ghost of my consciousness or just a shadow of nothingness caught in the void of tomorrows past, on solar winds my spirit cast, left to float & drift away riding on the solar rays

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2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Wed 04/04/12 12:34 PM
Heartfelt

insangel Joined Thu 11/03/11 Posts: 258	Wed 04/04/12 01:26 PM


Ainjel Joined Sat 01/24/09 Posts: 3610	Wed 04/04/12 02:24 PM
..nice..

insangel Joined Thu 11/03/11 Posts: 258	Wed 04/04/12 05:21 PM
..nice.. thank u

insangel Joined Thu 11/03/11 Posts: 258	Sun 04/08/12 10:03 AM Edited by insangel on Sun 04/08/12 10:07 AM
when it is the end of my play will anything of me remain? a ghost of my consciousness or just a shadow of nothingness caught in the void of tomorrows past, on solar winds my spirit cast, left to float & drift away riding on the solar rays am I bound for eternal bliss, dependent on a saviors kiss. that let's me know that I've done well. and saves me from eternal hell or will i simply feed the ground no consciousness to hear a sound?

nhej Joined Thu 04/05/12 Posts: 23	Sun 04/08/12 08:22 PM
nice

insangel Joined Thu 11/03/11 Posts: 258	Tue 04/10/12 07:43 PM
nice thank u

Unknow Joined Fri 09/02/11 Posts: 170	Wed 04/11/12 07:10 AM
Nice

insangel Joined Thu 11/03/11 Posts: 258	Thu 04/12/12 07:13 PM
Nice

mig25 Joined Sun 08/10/08 Posts: 1532	Sat 04/14/12 01:54 AM
a perfect poem

insangel Joined Thu 11/03/11 Posts: 258	Tue 04/17/12 12:44 PM
a perfect poem thank you

insangel Joined Thu 11/03/11 Posts: 258	Tue 04/17/12 12:46 PM
when it is the end of my play will anything of me remain? a ghost of my consciousness or just a shadow of nothingness caught in the void of tomorrows past, on solar winds my spirit cast, left to float & drift away riding on the solar rays am I bound for eternal bliss, dependent on a saviors kiss. that let's me know that I've done well. and saves me from eternal hell or will i simply feed the ground no consciousness to hear a sound?

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insangel Joined Thu 11/03/11 Posts: 258	Wed 05/23/12 01:14 PM
when it is the end of my play will anything of me remain? a ghost of my consciousness or just a shadow of nothingness caught in the void of tomorrows past, on solar winds my spirit cast, left to float & drift away riding on the solar rays am I bound for eternal bliss, dependent on a saviors kiss. that let's me know that I've done well. and saves me from eternal hell or will i simply feed the ground no consciousness to hear a sound? will I be Reborn again. into someone else's skin. until I pay for karmas tolls bound to live in roles?

insangel Joined Thu 11/03/11 Posts: 258	Wed 05/23/12 01:15 PM
when it is the end of my play will anything of me remain? a ghost of my consciousness or just a shadow of nothingness caught in the void of tomorrows past, on solar winds my spirit cast, left to float & drift away riding on the solar rays am I bound for eternal bliss, dependent on a saviors kiss. that let's me know that I've done well. and saves me from eternal hell or will i simply feed the ground no consciousness to hear a sound? will I be Reborn again. into someone else's skin. until I pay for karmas tolls bound to live in other roles?