Topic: The Pieces Came Together
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Mon 02/20/12 11:05 AM
He came to her in invisible pieces
Standing tall and proud
His words provided the strength she needed
And his arms restored her balance
In his eyes she finds the promise of a future
Of dreams she had long since forgotten
But deep inside he is broken
A fact he is blissfully unaware

She came to him in invisible pieces
So soft and beautifully round
Her words provided the answers to his loneliness
And in her arms a shelter found
Through her eyes he sees a protector
On a white stallion he proudly rides
But deep inside she is broken
A fact she is blissfully unaware

On fractured foundations they start to build
A life in which to share
At first they resist, but both insist, in each other they must trust
So their guards stand down
Their hand are bound
Into the abyss they leap
The pieces came together
To form a glorious whole

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Mon 02/20/12 11:35 AM
wow that was beautiful.

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Mon 02/20/12 11:42 AM

wow that was beautiful.


Thank you daisy flowerforyou

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Mon 02/20/12 12:49 PM
:heart: flowerforyou

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Mon 02/20/12 12:51 PM
:heart: flowerforyou

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Mon 02/20/12 04:41 PM
:heart: flowerforyou Very beautiful 42,,and I enjoyed reading it.

I think we're all broken on here, until we find that one,
who really wants to try and make us feel them and their heart..
and as that goes forward,,we pull ourselves back together for them.
To be,,NEW,,and ready to have a start...yet many have false walls that only fool themselves as to how broken they really are inside,,

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Mon 02/20/12 05:24 PM
I LIKE IT!

Love that line about the invisible pieces. A very well constructed poem, and I was all ready to jump with them at the end! Beautifully done.

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Mon 02/20/12 05:25 PM

:heart: flowerforyou Very beautiful 42,,and I enjoyed reading it.

I think we're all broken on here, until we find that one,
who really wants to try and make us feel them and their heart..
and as that goes forward,,we pull ourselves back together for them.
To be,,NEW,,and ready to have a start...yet many have false walls that only fool themselves as to how broken they really are inside,,


Sometimes I think it's easier to fool yourself than just about anybody else. I wonder why that is.

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Tue 02/21/12 03:24 PM
flowers Thank you Joy, Iam4u and Bravalady

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Tue 02/21/12 04:22 PM
flowerforyou

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Tue 02/21/12 04:39 PM
Such a beautiful happening...two broken pieces fit together perfectly...the miracle of love?....:heart: