Topic: The Pieces Came Together | |
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He came to her in invisible pieces
Standing tall and proud His words provided the strength she needed And his arms restored her balance In his eyes she finds the promise of a future Of dreams she had long since forgotten But deep inside he is broken A fact he is blissfully unaware She came to him in invisible pieces So soft and beautifully round Her words provided the answers to his loneliness And in her arms a shelter found Through her eyes he sees a protector On a white stallion he proudly rides But deep inside she is broken A fact she is blissfully unaware On fractured foundations they start to build A life in which to share At first they resist, but both insist, in each other they must trust So their guards stand down Their hand are bound Into the abyss they leap The pieces came together To form a glorious whole |
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wow that was beautiful.
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wow that was beautiful. Thank you daisy |
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Very beautiful 42,,and I enjoyed reading it.
I think we're all broken on here, until we find that one, who really wants to try and make us feel them and their heart.. and as that goes forward,,we pull ourselves back together for them. To be,,NEW,,and ready to have a start...yet many have false walls that only fool themselves as to how broken they really are inside,, |
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I LIKE IT!
Love that line about the invisible pieces. A very well constructed poem, and I was all ready to jump with them at the end! Beautifully done. |
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Very beautiful 42,,and I enjoyed reading it. I think we're all broken on here, until we find that one, who really wants to try and make us feel them and their heart.. and as that goes forward,,we pull ourselves back together for them. To be,,NEW,,and ready to have a start...yet many have false walls that only fool themselves as to how broken they really are inside,, Sometimes I think it's easier to fool yourself than just about anybody else. I wonder why that is. |
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Thank you Joy, Iam4u and Bravalady
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Such a beautiful happening...two broken pieces fit together perfectly...the miracle of love?....
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