Topic: Etchings
no photo
Sun 02/19/12 01:26 AM
Vast,
is the canvas,
in my mind.
You paint..

mig25's photo
Sun 02/19/12 01:34 AM

Vast,
is the canvas,
in my mind.
You paint..



Colors
so vivid
that each one
becomes
the light
for the next
until the world
is as beautiful
as the painting
your soul has created

no photo
Sun 02/19/12 02:15 AM
Edited by iam4u on Sun 02/19/12 02:16 AM


Vast,
is the canvas,
in my mind.
You paint..



Colors
so vivid
that each one
becomes
the light
for the next
until the world
is as beautiful
as the painting
your soul has created
NICE add Mig,,and its cool to do these,,,loldrinker

mig25's photo
Sun 02/19/12 02:18 AM



Vast,
is the canvas,
in my mind.
You paint..



Colors
so vivid
that each one
becomes
the light
for the next
until the world
is as beautiful
as the painting
your soul has created
NICE add Mig,,and its cool to do these,,,loldrinker


Yeah it is . . . the best part is that the add ons don't change the poets intent but alters the reader's understanding. But this was a really nice poem

bastet126's photo
Sun 02/19/12 04:28 AM
vivid,
are your colors
paint me.

fun, isn't it? :)

pennyg281's photo
Sun 02/19/12 07:35 PM
Red Green Orange Blue its my turn to paint you. :)

pennyg281's photo
Sun 02/19/12 07:36 PM
Red Green Orange Blue its my turn to paint you. :)

willntheway's photo
Fri 02/24/12 02:38 PM
Good one terry... XX WILLNTHEWAY