Topic: Open Your Eyes
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Sat 10/14/06 07:22 AM
Open your eyes
She stands right before you
The gurl, the one who desires you
Just open your eyes
Look with your heart and not your mind
She stands right before you
The gurl, the one who wishes for you
Take her hand
Take her heart
She gives both willingly
Just open your eyes
Look with your heart and not your mind
She stands before you
The gurl, the one who loves you
Take a chance, take a risk
Just take her hand
And her heart will follow
Take a chance , take a risk
Just take her love........

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Sat 10/14/06 08:42 AM
"Take her hand and he heart will follow" is just an
awsome line from this poem CCP you display a great
sense of emotion in what you write.

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Sat 10/14/06 10:11 AM
that's pretty good cherub and it happens all too often. thanks for
posting it.