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Topic: Let the hands flow
Sine_Cera Joined Thu 01/05/12 Posts: 619	Mon 01/09/12 09:05 PM
9:57 pm Earth spinning Earth falling Eyes falling Eyes closing Doors closing Doors locking Heart locking Heart breaking Glass breaking Glass shaking Hands shaking Hands rising Sun rising Sun burning Fire burning Fire raging People raging People dying Earth dying Earth spinning 10:05 pm

Sin_and_Sorrow Joined Sun 01/01/12 Posts: 5757	Mon 01/09/12 10:57 PM
..ok, after a second look, my opinion was the same as the first. It made me dizzy. So, cleaned off my glasses. Rubbed temple. And then tried. After such, I realized something new.. I really need new glasses. So, after grabbing my other pair; I tried one more time. Then I realized something new.. This is purdy freakin sweet. :O Although, I must say. That is a lot of -ing words.

Sine_Cera Joined Thu 01/05/12 Posts: 619	Mon 01/09/12 11:00 PM
mucho -ing words I'd fix it but that would ruin the point of ultimate free writing haha

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