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Topic: A Future with Love.
VintagenNerdy Joined Sat 12/31/11 Posts: 1231	Sat 01/07/12 05:50 PM
I just want to say, I hardly call myself a poet, however I do on occasion feel the need to express my emotions in the form of prose. A Future with Love. My precious insanity. My reverse vanity. I can see my future. As I sew up my heart with a suture. Lost in my beautiful depression. Evolving into my latest obsession. Throwing away my rose colored glasses. The ones used to fool the masses. I can say that I'm almost no longer aware. It almost feels good to give into my despair. Fast forward, up to today. Steady yourself and press play. A smile visits my face, with your every other word. My previous jaded soul no longer finds these feelings absurd. My what once was an icey exterior is melting away. My feelings I now carry on my sleeve, on display. Thank you dear one for waking me up because I was asleep. I know now you're the one that will hold my hand as I leap.

Sin_and_Sorrow Joined Sun 01/01/12 Posts: 5757	Sat 01/07/12 05:59 PM
It's.. so beautiful... ..I don't even want to ruin it with more words than necessary. Thank you for sharing.

VintagenNerdy Joined Sat 12/31/11 Posts: 1231	Sat 01/07/12 06:00 PM
It's.. so beautiful... ..I don't even want to ruin it with more words than necessary. Thank you for sharing. Thank you.

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Sat 01/07/12 06:17 PM
Much heart,,much stress,,,but,,a very relaxed rest,,in its all. WELL DONE,,I believe WE have another New Poet,,,

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Sat 01/07/12 06:25 PM
I just want to say, I hardly call myself a poet, however I do on occasion feel the need to express my emotions in the form of prose. A Future with Love. My precious insanity. My reverse vanity. I can see my future. As I sew up my heart with a suture. Lost in my beautiful depression. Evolving into my latest obsession. Throwing away my rose colored glasses. The ones used to fool the masses. I can say that I'm almost no longer aware. It almost feels good to give into my despair. Fast forward, up to today. Steady yourself and press play. A smile visits my face, with your every other word. My previous jaded soul no longer finds these feelings absurd. My what once was an icey exterior is melting away. My feelings I now carry on my sleeve, on display. Thank you dear one for waking me up because I was asleep. I know now you're the one that will hold my hand as I leap. Love inspires...well done (both of you ).....

VintagenNerdy Joined Sat 12/31/11 Posts: 1231	Sat 01/07/12 06:27 PM
Thank you.

1SOPHIAIUX Joined Sun 10/09/11 Posts: 881	Sat 01/07/12 06:42 PM Edited by 1SOPHIAIUX on Sat 01/07/12 06:44 PM
Not a poet myself...your words touched my mind-heart-and soul. Bravo! Thanks for sharing.

VintagenNerdy Joined Sat 12/31/11 Posts: 1231	Sat 01/07/12 06:50 PM
Not a poet myself...your words touched my mind-heart-and soul. Bravo! Thanks for sharing. Thank you! I'm glad others can enjoy it.

Ainjel Joined Sat 01/24/09 Posts: 3610	Sat 01/07/12 06:58 PM
Very nice..

Sin_and_Sorrow Joined Sun 01/01/12 Posts: 5757	Sat 01/07/12 06:59 PM
..see beautiful? I told you, you have a natural talent and gift. Say you're not a poet? Psh! You got more comments on just this one; then I did with a bunch of mine.:) I just can't stop reading it.. Like a really good book, you want to set down cause your eyes are tired, but can't.. because you just have to know what happens next. :]

brwnkimba Joined Tue 05/22/07 Posts: 1276	Sat 01/07/12 07:06 PM
me likey

Fire2Burn Joined Mon 01/31/11 Posts: 606	Sat 01/07/12 07:07 PM
Very nice.. I second that...

VintagenNerdy Joined Sat 12/31/11 Posts: 1231	Sat 01/07/12 07:25 PM
Thank you for the kind words. Since I haven't written anything in a while the compliments are words of encouragement. and mike..

machug Joined Sun 09/04/11 Posts: 6601	Sat 01/07/12 10:36 PM
Very nice!! Beautiful expression of emotion.

VintagenNerdy Joined Sat 12/31/11 Posts: 1231	Sun 01/08/12 11:30 AM
Very nice!! Beautiful expression of emotion. Thank you.

teadipper Joined Wed 10/19/11 Posts: 2732	Sun 01/08/12 11:39 AM
I just want to say, I hardly call myself a poet, however I do on occasion feel the need to express my emotions in the form of prose. A Future with Love. My precious insanity. My reverse vanity. I can see my future. As I sew up my heart with a suture. Lost in my beautiful depression. Evolving into my latest obsession. Throwing away my rose colored glasses. The ones used to fool the masses. I can say that I'm almost no longer aware. It almost feels good to give into my despair. Fast forward, up to today. Steady yourself and press play. A smile visits my face, with your every other word. My previous jaded soul no longer finds these feelings absurd. My what once was an icey exterior is melting away. My feelings I now carry on my sleeve, on display. Thank you dear one for waking me up because I was asleep. I know now you're the one that will hold my hand as I leap. I LOVE IT, VINTAGE!!

Sin_and_Sorrow Joined Sun 01/01/12 Posts: 5757	Sun 01/08/12 01:49 PM
:)

Fire2Burn Joined Mon 01/31/11 Posts: 606	Sun 01/08/12 02:02 PM Edited by Fire2Burn on Sun 01/08/12 02:02 PM
I once wrote a creative poetry..named Rise N Shine..

jaded72 Joined Tue 12/06/11 Posts: 1456	Sun 01/08/12 05:18 PM
Well done. You have a way with words.

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Sun 01/08/12 05:22 PM