I know it seems long, but in reality.
It's not really.
Just felt kind of.. lonely.
So, I did what they teach you in like Elementary School.
Grab a pen.
Grab a paper.
Write.
Don't stop.
Don't pause.
Don't even lift the pen from the paper.

This one doesn't have a name.
I'm open for ideas.
But in the end.
This is the result of the thoughts swirling in my head.
LoL.
Come to think of it.
I'm not even sure if it makes sense.
Hope, maybe, someone likes it a little. :X
There was a brief spatter where I talked about my grandfather..
..and a brief line or two about my cat, who was annoying me.
So, I did remove those four lines..
Yeah, still not sure what I think..
Probably should have re-read it before posting it. :X
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Untitled
01.06.2012

Explicit
Just watch as
The beauty
Begins its fading
It's demented
Corrupted
All together revealing
It's plagued
And ambitious
It's broken
So fix it
But reckless
Broke the window
It's tampered
By the ghost who
Is so self-righteous
And lacking
A sense of
Direction
A single notion
A misconception
Praying for the release
Yet satisfied
By its torment

It shines
It glimmers
It rises in the house
Of the wicked
Where tongues run loose
If its not broke
Why fix it?
The triumphant
Shall find glory
The happy ending
That has no story
It's careless
Yet cares
Mistaken for the ruthless
Murder
Runs rampant
Sleeping with the child
Like I said
It's wicked
Temptation
Feelings run wild
The abyss of
No return
Sacrifice
Your virtue
Pursue that idea
One that is not your own

A feeling
Burning
Deep within this soul
Eyes that
Turn black
Lives that lack
It's evil
Personified
Yet somehow
Remains coherent
It's cruelty
Runs through me
Words that will be mistaken
Lingering in my mind
Tingling down my spine
It's a phantom
That lingers
It runs right aside you
Distractions
From attractions
Of strangers
From interactions
Its that knife that pierces
The one who looks away
Distorted
Distraught
Ignoring all
That you've been taught

Give in
To the seduction
So repulsive
It's stagnant
The aroma
Left in
It's disturbing wake
It's evil
It's pain
Just ignore it's sugar coating
Blocked by
The ribbons
False give of salvation
Its misleading
Its fake
There is no
Path to
The redemption
Of a heart
That is already lost

It's a purpose
Found in something
It's a reason
Born from nothing
It's just a
Stupid story
That never leads
To one's own glory
It has no
Presence
No parades or
Territory
It's just a road that
Finds you wanting
To the reality
Your own image
Is something
That you shall never own
Mass produced by
A situation
It's explicit
It's unheard of
It's just a journey
Another story
A man and
His pistol
Found their way to God
Suffering
From a story
Written in blood
Entering
The Gates of
A place unseen
So high above
Lost to an idea
An idea called love

Nice...

Dayum.

Not only did you read it fast..
I swear I just posted it. o.o

Thanks!

:D

It somehow make sense?

I just felt like unleashing..

am a fast reader as a learner....n unleash tha power of creative writting..

LoL

Yeah, you bet you are.

You ever do that 'Blind Writing' as my teacher called it?

I think it has a more politically correct name..
..but that's what I know it by.

nope ive nvr did that blind writting, becoz am not blind..

oohh kool..:0

Call it Depraved.....

I'm not blind either. :/

You just write, non-stop, for three minutes.
Whatever pops into your head.
No matter how perverse, or unethical.
You just put any and everything on your mind.
On to paper.
Than read it.

Depraved, huh?

Maybe.

If you can tell me 'why' that name fits?

:D

"am not blind either"...hahahaahahah
oh i see now, wat ever poppin in tha head, thts soundz ty..ive nvr got got tha chance to do that..=[

Next time you're really stressed, worked up, etc and can't find any non-destructive, non-lethal, and non-harmful ways to release it..

Try it.
If you are honest with yourself, and give it a serious attempt..
It helps. And worse case scenario, even if it doesn't resolve the issue; you just spared 3-5 minutes writing and reading that could have gone to breaking a window, a fist, or hurting the feelings of someone who didn't deserve it, nor you wanted to hurt..

It's a harmless, self-indulging release.

Beh, at least for me.

thnx mate i will do that..

No problem. ;]

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Randomly hitting keys also works. XD

Funny guy.. but yep, Blind Writing/Typing is great, and you can sometimes be amazed what you have written once you are done..Just write whats there, don't pause to think, just write, becomes a good way to chill out without drawing blood, or making bruises or a mess you have to clean up later on..It is pretty much how I think I write..Nothing is forced, it is just there waiting to be penned/typed..

:P

There's my Ainjel. :D

I was waiting for you to pop in. :)

I do it all the time.
Sometimes, I even take pieces from it..
..and next thing you know..

You're praising me for it. :D

I kinda like this one..
First one I think I've posted without actually reading/editing it myself. Minus the brief parts I took out (mainly because of the profane nature)

Loved it Sin. :) Blind writing is one of my favorite ways to destrss or sort out the millions of things floating around in my head.

Thank you. :]

Now that I've read it a few times..
I noticed I somehow made rhymes in it. :O

Still not sure if it actually makes sense to be denoted as a 'poem' or anything..
..but felt really good to just let it out.

I think I'm going to start doing it more often.
Putting them up that is.
Unedited, unabridged.

Maybe, for once, people will see more than just words.
(Not all people, mind you.)

Thank you again. I adore comments. :)