Topic: I Love You | |
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The glittering sun in your eyes
Melts my heart away I admire you for who you are In every single way The warmth of your touch Pierces through my soul You alone are the only one Who can make my life whole Like a plant needs water I need you like air Because in times of problems You are always there Imperfections make you perfect Mistakes make you right You are to me, the source Who brings everlasting light Your kiss that feels Sweet through and through To you I say this I love you |
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good, the beauty of life is in imperfections, nicely worded
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thanks frank, i am getting back to the way i was a long time ago, it feels good.
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I liked your poems, both this one and the one on the other post.
makes me want to share one of mine. Here it goes Willing words without warning made memorized by constant thought. Foreign feelings now forming with familiar fear you would not. Unknown origin of my actions though honest and sincere. Overcome by the developed dissatisfaction you wouldn't like what you hear. Timid yet tempted I feel I must reveal, captivating confessions I promise you are real. Irrestibly infatuated, those impulsed words now true. Disstinctly distraught, caught, by the essence of you. In moments that mattered I knew with just a glimpse Yours must be the face that launched a thousand ships A song of sirens sung softly in mind while a reason for these feelings, I try to find. I think it's your smile, or maybe your face, It could be your poise, Just your elegant grace. Whatever it is I will be forever figuring out cause whatever it is I could never forget about fascinating phrases with no bearing on the matter Meant to admit I'm not trying to flatter If only for my words if there's any hesitation then there aren't real emotion only manipulation I want you honestly not for something I said because I am me not for what you've read the persisting presence of my past makes it difficult to let this go but your beauty has baffled me and for that reason I can't say no feelings like these often unexpressed I usually can hold them under but if the night is right willing words without warning will make you wonder |
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that's beautiful ohthewater... you should share more often.
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