Topic: A beginning
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Fri 12/02/11 10:48 PM
Gone from my life, left to sorrow.
Pi-ss on the whys, cries, or goodbyes.
Sure, we all have another tomorrow.
Our hearts felt each other,
we fell in-love,,like no-other.
All the looks, cooks, and books.
Hugs, tugs, and shrugs.
Kisses, blisses , close misses.
Tenderness, togetherness, forgetfulness.
WE LIVED ON OUR LOVE.
Emotional, rational, inescapable.
Unforsaking, fornicating.
Best friends through and through.
Whoever could have knew.
That we could say, we're through.

Never A love tried,
Where one never cried.

Why must trial and error remove a friend.
When its just two people in the end.

Cupid's arrow misses many a heart.
yet it's point, rips each other apart.

Feeling bliss from their first kiss,
turns into a life-long miss.

Loving sighs, yield endless cries.

Weakness bends to passionate nights,
Then 'the fire' in the eyes ignites.

Tragically unforeseen, one turns mean.

Another love gone bad,
one happy, one sad.

Leave and just keep on going,
All in the lesions of growing.

Shattered hearts do mend,
even if both only pretend.

He said, She said,
She said, He said.
Yet their love died.
The End!




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Sat 12/03/11 07:10 AM
brokenheart :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

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Sat 12/03/11 09:06 AM
iam4u, this is a wonderful work...words danced so gracefully and syllables weaved into one another so magaically and I felt everything you said. Truly awesome~

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Sat 12/03/11 05:46 PM
Thank you Tazz man,,and I do feel humble when I see you have read my words,,Thanks a bunch..drinker




HOTSIZZLE,,,,,,Thank YOU for reading and thank you so for the compliment of saying you liked it and understood my thoughts,,VERY COOL!!!Now if only the rest of this Nation could do THAT,,I might have many readers,,,,lol,,,Welcome to this home pf wishful Poets..
Keep on reading,,and give us some of yours,,,I just BET,,you write a little bit huh?,,,Be safe and well,,flowerforyou

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Sat 12/03/11 05:46 PM
Edited by iam4u on Sat 12/03/11 05:47 PM
Life is sometimes a hard road to follow....

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Sat 12/03/11 06:03 PM
Terry, this write is emotionaly felt, hugs to you.flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

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Sat 12/03/11 06:08 PM

Thank you Tazz man,,and I do feel humble when I see you have read my words,,Thanks a bunch..drinker




HOTSIZZLE,,,,,,Thank YOU for reading and thank you so for the compliment of saying you liked it and understood my thoughts,,VERY COOL!!!Now if only the rest of this Nation could do THAT,,I might have many readers,,,,lol,,,Welcome to this home pf wishful Poets..
Keep on reading,,and give us some of yours,,,I just BET,,you write a little bit huh?,,,Be safe and well,,flowerforyou
Thank you sir. Terry your words are indeed from the inner person, that glows out.

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Sat 12/03/11 06:08 PM
Edited by tazzops on Sat 12/03/11 06:09 PM

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Sat 12/03/11 06:11 PM

Terry, this write is emotionaly felt, hugs to you.flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou
flowerforyou Thankyou sweet Lady,,and Its all in the heart
that all of us have,,when we part....:wink: :heart:
Emotional rescue,,,,,or left to dream, this flowing American stream,