Topic: Alone and Afraid.
LunaChan's photo
Wed 11/23/11 11:28 AM
Why must i wish to be in his embrace,
And sit here crying instead.
To know the love must have gone,
And watch the wounds that have bled.

To want to be his,
But instead i'm alone.
And my love for him will never leave,
its not something to be outgrown.

In my heart so black yet pure,
I fell it tare to shreds.
As i try and fix the impossible,
I feel like im being pulled by threads.

Like a pupet with no puppeteer,
Simply manipulated by wind and pain.
I have accepted lonelyness embrace,
All happiness has been slain.

No one to lean on,
No one to hear my pittiful screams.
I wake in the middle of the night,
Night terrors have taken my dreams.

I've been left alone,
And oh so afraid.
You said you'd always be there...
I feel simply.... betrayed.....


Side note:
This is not one of my better works, but one of pure feeling. I wrote this shortly after my boyfriend left me. I have now gotten over it to an extent. Enough to know im ready to give love an other chance =) He may have been my first love...But he was not my true love.

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Wed 11/23/11 11:35 AM
brokenheart :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

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Wed 11/23/11 12:11 PM
flowerforyou Well,,I think its pretty dang cool,,,Nice poem..
and glad your here to write many like this one,,have some fun and welcome..

LunaChan's photo
Wed 11/23/11 12:21 PM
thank you =)

gizmo41's photo
Wed 11/23/11 12:34 PM
beautiful -

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Wed 11/23/11 01:08 PM
flowerforyou


I'm glad you're ready to try again..

burgundybry's photo
Wed 11/23/11 02:29 PM
Good stuff!!:thumbsup:

RhonLynn's photo
Wed 11/23/11 03:01 PM
Very Nice flowerforyou

LunaChan's photo
Thu 11/24/11 09:17 PM
thanks everyone for the positive feedback :D

oldsage's photo
Fri 11/25/11 08:45 AM
we are never alone & fear is a choice.

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Fri 11/25/11 11:59 PM

we are never alone & fear is a choice.


You are a wise old sage..

Very nice write LunaChan..