Topic: Alone and Afraid. | |
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Why must i wish to be in his embrace,
And sit here crying instead. To know the love must have gone, And watch the wounds that have bled. To want to be his, But instead i'm alone. And my love for him will never leave, its not something to be outgrown. In my heart so black yet pure, I fell it tare to shreds. As i try and fix the impossible, I feel like im being pulled by threads. Like a pupet with no puppeteer, Simply manipulated by wind and pain. I have accepted lonelyness embrace, All happiness has been slain. No one to lean on, No one to hear my pittiful screams. I wake in the middle of the night, Night terrors have taken my dreams. I've been left alone, And oh so afraid. You said you'd always be there... I feel simply.... betrayed..... Side note: This is not one of my better works, but one of pure feeling. I wrote this shortly after my boyfriend left me. I have now gotten over it to an extent. Enough to know im ready to give love an other chance =) He may have been my first love...But he was not my true love. |
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Well,,I think its pretty dang cool,,,Nice poem..
and glad your here to write many like this one,,have some fun and welcome.. |
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thank you =)
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beautiful -
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I'm glad you're ready to try again.. |
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Good stuff!!
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Very Nice
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thanks everyone for the positive feedback :D
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we are never alone & fear is a choice.
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we are never alone & fear is a choice. You are a wise old sage.. Very nice write LunaChan.. |
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