Topic: Sober
HuniBuni's photo
Fri 11/04/11 12:49 PM
Sober
Since you've gone I've lost the chip on my shoulder
All my battle scars re erected seem colder
The place now bleak I seek around aimlessly
For what u so famously were
to realise loss I've fallen to my demise
Your sighs my infinite lyllabys
Intertwined the edge in carve on marble stone
Trace your face on time line now undefined
where I once embraced your reflection
Part by part a section lost in translation
Footsteps I cannot follow
In the leadings the findings of tomorrow
An embrace sooner gone then noble
Nothing lasts forever soon we will be sober

Superhero88's photo
Fri 11/04/11 12:56 PM
That was real good poem...I loved it

Sharris's photo
Fri 11/04/11 01:32 PM

Sober
Since you've gone I've lost the chip on my shoulder
All my battle scars re erected seem colder
The place now bleak I seek around aimlessly
For what u so famously were
to realise loss I've fallen to my demise
Your sighs my infinite lyllabys
Intertwined the edge in carve on marble stone
Trace your face on time line now undefined
where I once embraced your reflection
Part by part a section lost in translation
Footsteps I cannot follow
In the leadings the findings of tomorrow
An embrace sooner gone then noble
Nothing lasts forever soon we will be sober

you nailed this astutely.

kc0003's photo
Fri 11/04/11 03:12 PM
welcome...flowerforyou