Topic: Rise N Shine
Fire2Burn's photo
Sat 10/22/11 01:05 PM
These is my first one i wrote..probably needs sum work but am going to get good at it in time...tongue2

Rise N Shine, tha stars has fallin, N tha sunrise has began With smell wet grass of the morning, N a cold breeze air passin by with a sigh of breathe...Rise N Shine.

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Sat 10/22/11 04:12 PM
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Sharris's photo
Sat 10/22/11 04:20 PM
beautiful description...
a cold breeze air passin by with a sigh of breathe...