Topic: One O'clock
mig25's photo
Sun 10/02/11 02:43 AM
One o’clock

One o’clock
the night is still
and the air cool

Deep breath

One o’clock
the clock’s light
continues to fight
the darkness

Sleep is uneasy
tossing
turning
trying
to escape the day’s
argument

Deeper breath

One o’clock
and removed
from the past
by another hour
minute
second
yet
nothing has changed
I’m still here
alone

I ask why
and then take
an even deeper breath

Where are you?

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Sun 10/02/11 09:30 AM
:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

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Sun 10/02/11 09:23 PM
Alone here at my rest as this one o'clock rolls in,,thinking back as I read your lines,,I feel I'm better,more redefined.
As to have stayed with one who only used me up,,and put me down.

Nice write Mig...:cry: drinker

kc0003's photo
Mon 10/03/11 11:31 AM
drinker

Andresubr's photo
Wed 10/05/11 09:11 PM
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