Topic: Had various results, I want your input | |
---|---|
I would like to have a outside perspective on what my profile portrays me like. Any advice would be appreciated thank you. :)
|
|
|
|
Half of your profile is very negative. I can understand putting likes and dislikes, but don't make half of your profile full of negative things.
|
|
|
|
Half of your profile is very negative. I can understand putting likes and dislikes, but don't make half of your profile full of negative things. well Im not a negative person really I am told my many Im the most positive person they know -_- can you please explain more of what you mean because IM not exactly sure what it mean and I feel I am not understanding something being said. Will you help me make it be more positive? |
|
|
|
Looks really good but you could use some editing for focus and organisation. You seem to ramble a bit and wind around and round. jmo. You you tell me more of what organization pattern would be of benefit? please explain what you mean by the rambling part as I am unsure of how I am doing that and advice on a more direct way of description? |
|
|
|
Edited by
singmesweet
on
Sun 08/21/11 07:21 PM
|
|
Half of your profile is very negative. I can understand putting likes and dislikes, but don't make half of your profile full of negative things. well Im not a negative person really I am told my many Im the most positive person they know -_- can you please explain more of what you mean because IM not exactly sure what it mean and I feel I am not understanding something being said. Will you help me make it be more positive? I mainly meant the long list of dislikes. |
|
|
|
Half of your profile is very negative. I can understand putting likes and dislikes, but don't make half of your profile full of negative things. well Im not a negative person really I am told my many Im the most positive person they know -_- can you please explain more of what you mean because IM not exactly sure what it mean and I feel I am not understanding something being said. Will you help me make it be more positive? I mainly meant the long list of dislikes. Alright, thanks |
|
|
|
If you say you're a positive person, get rid of that long list. List a few important ones and delete the rest. Your dislikes will come out in conversations when you get to know someone.
|
|
|
|
I would like to have a outside perspective on what my profile portrays me like. Any advice would be appreciated thank you. :) OK,,see this is it,,IF YOU WRITE YOUR LIFE AWAY in one page,,no-one will have anything to start conversations with you about? IF its real LONG,,they will think your like me and very long winded and say HELL NO,,,lol,,so Keep it at about 1000 words or less and start it with something funny to draw them INTO reading it,,Some plow of a like and ,,,,so your checking me out huh,,,well I'm,,,,blaw blaw,,lol,Or So tell me,,,was it MY face that brought you here or my charm,,just kidding,,, But some of YOUR funny at its start and that will have them at least reading it to learn you? Everything else is fine man,,and reply here to many posts to be seen and your increase your odds to be a guy they might like to know? Good Luck and just be you man,,and honest,,your make some great friends here,,,, |
|
|
|
Edited by
Cammi Ronni
on
Sun 08/21/11 08:25 PM
|
|
I would like to have a outside perspective on what my profile portrays me like. Any advice would be appreciated thank you. :) OK,,see this is it,,IF YOU WRITE YOUR LIFE AWAY in one page,,no-one will have anything to start conversations with you about? IF its real LONG,,they will think your like me and very long winded and say HELL NO,,,lol,,so Keep it at about 1000 words or less and start it with something funny to draw them INTO reading it,,Some plow of a like and ,,,,so your checking me out huh,,,well I'm,,,,blaw blaw,,lol,Or So tell me,,,was it MY face that brought you here or my charm,,just kidding,,, But some of YOUR funny at its start and that will have them at least reading it to learn you? Everything else is fine man,,and reply here to many posts to be seen and your increase your odds to be a guy they might like to know? Good Luck and just be you man,,and honest,,your make some great friends here,,,, I have changed my layout of profile to short and very very long to this.. -_- ... I leave the funny cocky thing to the messages i pretty much just want to give a woman a view of what im looking for over something that looks like an essay for a job application that talks all about what I think i am like. Kinda wanna let the woman find out about who I am through conversation than display to everyone what im like. I am being fully honest in my profile. and communicating my views. this profile is no where near my life story and only a few perceptions on how i view things not really anything about what music im into, or what i do for fun or my sense of humor and where i grew up theres much more to me than what little i did put on there...I dont really want a long distance thing, just someone in my area that i can eventually meet if things work out and a friendship starts then great :) |
|
|
|
I would like to have a outside perspective on what my profile portrays me like. Any advice would be appreciated thank you. :) OK,,see this is it,,IF YOU WRITE YOUR LIFE AWAY in one page,,no-one will have anything to start conversations with you about? IF its real LONG,,they will think your like me and very long winded and say HELL NO,,,lol,,so Keep it at about 1000 words or less and start it with something funny to draw them INTO reading it,,Some plow of a like and ,,,,so your checking me out huh,,,well I'm,,,,blaw blaw,,lol,Or So tell me,,,was it MY face that brought you here or my charm,,just kidding,,, But some of YOUR funny at its start and that will have them at least reading it to learn you? Everything else is fine man,,and reply here to many posts to be seen and your increase your odds to be a guy they might like to know? Good Luck and just be you man,,and honest,,your make some great friends here,,,, I have changed my layout of profile to short and very very long to this.. -_- ... I leave the funny cocky thing to the messages i pretty much just want to give a woman a view of what im looking for over something that looks like an essay for a job application that talks all about what I think i am like. Kinda wanna let the woman find out about who I am through conversation than display to everyone what im like. I am being fully honest in my profile. and communicating my views. this profile is no where near my life story and only a few perceptions on how i view things not really anything about what music im into, or what i do for fun or my sense of humor and where i grew up theres much more to me than what little i did put on there...I dont really want a long distance thing, just someone in my area that i can eventually meet if things work out and a friendship starts then great :) Your profile was great,,to know you and who your seeking,,,COOL,, BUT,,,IF,,,you want my REAL advice for you,,THAT ABOVE WAS IT. Anyone can compliment and go on,,I just TRY and be real with someones asking,,,Good luck with whatever you seek to find,,and TRULY HERE,,your words and profile ONLY NEED YOU,,TO LIKE THEM.. Anyone else can ONLY suggest,,the finished product comes from your mind and key strokes,,, Have fun here... |
|
|
|
I would like to have a outside perspective on what my profile portrays me like. Any advice would be appreciated thank you. :) OK,,see this is it,,IF YOU WRITE YOUR LIFE AWAY in one page,,no-one will have anything to start conversations with you about? IF its real LONG,,they will think your like me and very long winded and say HELL NO,,,lol,,so Keep it at about 1000 words or less and start it with something funny to draw them INTO reading it,,Some plow of a like and ,,,,so your checking me out huh,,,well I'm,,,,blaw blaw,,lol,Or So tell me,,,was it MY face that brought you here or my charm,,just kidding,,, But some of YOUR funny at its start and that will have them at least reading it to learn you? Everything else is fine man,,and reply here to many posts to be seen and your increase your odds to be a guy they might like to know? Good Luck and just be you man,,and honest,,your make some great friends here,,,, I have changed my layout of profile to short and very very long to this.. -_- ... I leave the funny cocky thing to the messages i pretty much just want to give a woman a view of what im looking for over something that looks like an essay for a job application that talks all about what I think i am like. Kinda wanna let the woman find out about who I am through conversation than display to everyone what im like. I am being fully honest in my profile. and communicating my views. this profile is no where near my life story and only a few perceptions on how i view things not really anything about what music im into, or what i do for fun or my sense of humor and where i grew up theres much more to me than what little i did put on there...I dont really want a long distance thing, just someone in my area that i can eventually meet if things work out and a friendship starts then great :) Your profile was great,,to know you and who your seeking,,,COOL,, BUT,,,IF,,,you want my REAL advice for you,,THAT ABOVE WAS IT. Anyone can compliment and go on,,I just TRY and be real with someones asking,,,Good luck with whatever you seek to find,,and TRULY HERE,,your words and profile ONLY NEED YOU,,TO LIKE THEM.. Anyone else can ONLY suggest,,the finished product comes from your mind and key strokes,,, Have fun here... well as this is all put in text its hard to convey my emotion Im not taking anything on personally and have no tone to it...how about ill just say im actually mentioning EVERYTHING in a calm manner...I have plenty of patience and dont take anything on from anything another person to heart, its why i want to see what people think of the person im trying looking like to others and how im being perceived as. I have made some changes to my profile shifted things and shortened things as best i could for now im still working on it... i will be checkin often for feedback as to how it looks and what people think :) |
|
|
|
More changes made what do you think of it ?
|
|
|
|
If you say you're a positive person, get rid of that long list. List a few important ones and delete the rest. Your dislikes will come out in conversations when you get to know someone. I did now thank i realize that i had too many up there, I feel letting these particular dislikes i have left to be of importance. Eg. I dont want a smoking drug abuser to message me... |
|
|
|
ok even more changes hows the new updates look?
|
|
|
|
Looks really good but you could use some editing for focus and organisation. You seem to ramble a bit and wind around and round. jmo. Ok took this into consideration whats your perspective on the new look |
|
|
|
Well some people have different views on dating what it means and i am trying to communicate my views on it, like online dating should i only message one person and date only the one person.. or should i date more than one person at a time as these things everyone feels differently about... i am just stating what i feel im alright with with..would you have a say on how i can improve communicating that?
|
|
|
|
Also in my beliefs i think sex is something that is important in a relationship...i understand how some people dont do it until marriage or because they wish to maintain their virginity till the find the one, kudos to those for following in what they believe. I believe its a way of expressing affection and desire in the partner and important in maintain a relationship, i have more i believe about it but thats why I capitalized it so someone would ask why its capitalized...if a person makes assumptions on my thoughts without first asking or clarifying i feel that there will be an issue in communication... I want somone to ask me why i did something why i have the likes i do why i have the dislikes i do.. to find an interest in me and figure me out... i dont want to paint a picture of how i see syself but i want the woman who is searching to find out ni her own experience by talking to me to see who i am or what kind of guy i am... If you have any advice on how i can better do this,im still working on it and am taking everyone's advice to thought, as im also using this advice in all different ways on other dating sites too its becoming quite helpful :)
|
|
|
|
Looks really good but you could use some editing for focus and organisation. You seem to ramble a bit and wind around and round. jmo. Ok took this into consideration whats your perspective on the new look Seems to have loooods more clarity...for me, at least. I would recommend getting rid of the section that starts with "Dating......" entirely. It doesnt seem to communicate clearly, and doesnt seem to fit with the other sections. I would also remove from your list of 'likes': SEX. Everyone likes sex, so mentioning it seems silly. I think it makes the reader think that its all you're, actually, after, if you list it, and list it in caps. On the other hand, you may choose to leave it all the way it is. I like to give my profile a hug and dont want anyone to bother it. meh. Its my little pet. I always think it's silly when people list sex as one of their likes. Or something they can't do without. That's pointing out the obvious for most people. |
|
|
|
Well some people have different views on dating what it means and i am trying to communicate my views on it, like online dating should i only message one person and date only the one person.. or should i date more than one person at a time as these things everyone feels differently about... i am just stating what i feel im alright with with..would you have a say on how i can improve communicating that? The way I take a site like this is I'm not actually dating someone until I meet them in person and see how it goes. The whole dating site thing is just another way to meet people. "Online dating" shouldn't be any different than actual dating, as it isn't dating until it happens in person. |
|
|
|
Here's my 2cents.
Look at other peoples profiles. If you see one you like, note what it is you like about its structure or content. My personal opinion is lists are not usually read, they are skimmed over by the eyes. Good Luck |
|
|