Topic: Ment to be
Twiztidryda3's photo
Wed 08/17/11 08:48 PM
I slit my throat,
you watched it bleed,
i feel no pain,
you set it free. 
Im falling down,
don’t cry for me.
Torn apart at the seams,
apart from you.
Broken down,
empty hearted,
nothing left,
Lost amongst the things of the past.
Thrown into a darkened hole,
tormented by my past demons.
Killing off all ive got,
you and i torn apart.
Envisioned a past that tears into the core.
Throbbing aching pain,
swarms into my veins,
bleeding feeling uneasy.
Dead and gone i see you cry knowing that inside you died.
Don’t cry for me my time is bye.
Left here inside this hole,
you and i meant to break apart,
a never-ending story with no happy ending.
i slit my throat,
you watched it bleed,
i felt no pain,
you set it free
Theirs no end for me,
you and i were meant to be...

LesDH's photo
Wed 08/17/11 08:57 PM
Touching, I know the feeling. Still hurting from a break up 3 months ago. Nice write!smokin

no photo
Thu 08/18/11 04:36 AM
Powerful and a little disturbing.

winterblue56's photo
Thu 08/18/11 08:12 PM
flowerforyou

thewaterbearer's photo
Thu 08/18/11 10:32 PM
A very dark write, a good write, when you need to vent about the dark side, writing about it is good, makes you feel better, its alot better than penting it all up inside.flowerforyou