Talking to those the booze created
making sense of the strange,
ripping my mind into many fragments
sanity's out of range,

looking at life thru amber foam
knockin' another one down,
killing depression with liquid depressants
just spinnin' my head aroun',

(will finish later...)

Great start - I look forward to seeing this finished..

Nice beginning and now I'm wondering when you're going to finish. Nice write

YOU can't just leave us hanging,,,,
But we understand,,,Its a nice work man..

Seem as though u have an idea.but now it wud b alil tricky to knw your grand idea.wil hope to knw your end of story

haven't had time to work on it. sorry.
Hopefully will have more time tonight.
Thanks for the encouragement.

Talking to those the booze created
making sense of the strange,
ripping my mind into many fragments
sanity's out of range,

looking at life thru amber foam
knockin' another one down,
killing depression with liquid depressants
just spinnin' my head aroun',

Keeping the lies
so clear in sight,
Lying to all
takin' a fall
fallinnnnnnnnnnnnn'
dooooooooooooown
into the abyss of booze and pills
taking a final step toward
a procrastinated suicide
so far gone
and not knowing who i am....

(this was from a fairly dark period of my life.)
-Mark 2011

Great emotional times. Hope you indeed have seen the lighter side of life.

absolutely!
most of my poetry is either very dark or very sexual...
funny how creativity works.

Nice finish flyingscooter...