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Topic: ~ first & second red
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Fri 07/22/11 12:09 PM
he's left the bouquet on the counter
for her to find
a little game between them

green,full leaves
droplets of water
cling to deep-red tips

she smiles
though not the usual bouquet
none
sweeter
than this bouquet
of radish from the garden
~

he washes-
something
under the tap
shakes it
holds it in his palm
a perfect-red strawberry
for you,
he says

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Fri 07/22/11 12:33 PM
drinker flowerforyou
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Fri 07/22/11 12:47 PM
That is sweetflowerforyou
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Fri 07/22/11 01:25 PM
now I'm hungry :wink:
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Fri 07/22/11 01:44 PM
:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:
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Fri 07/22/11 01:45 PM
flowers nice TB...
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Fri 07/22/11 08:12 PM

I love the simplicity of this. It says so much. flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou
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Sat 07/23/11 09:35 AM
2KidsMom....flowerforyou
thewaterbearer...flowerforyou
manOfewwords...:smile:
tazztops...flowerforyou
Ainjel..flowerforyou
Alterette...flowerforyou
thank-you
for reading
teasingbrunette
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Sun 07/24/11 11:08 AM
flowerforyou
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Tue 07/26/11 11:48 AM
kc......aww...smile.
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Tue 07/26/11 04:20 PM
mine were raspberries picked from his mother's garden...a lovely vacation.
I love your beauty.
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Wed 07/27/11 09:55 AM
S......a lovely thing to write from a lovely person...teasingbrunette

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