A Love That Will Never Be

When the blue moon sits upon the desert sands
And summer’s sun floats in the open sea
When the solar winds howl to the ground
Comes a love that will never be

When the universe is weeping in sorrow
Crying stars from the sky
Will be the day our love cease
In a cold month of July

When the world stops turning
Stopping existence of time abruptly
When all things return to dust
Comes a love that will never be

Bert Jimmerson

Very Nice

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as love arises
the moon tend to switch
for the sea is bright
and opens the doors
to the new found love
to open your eyes of what is
to become
as crying through the open
seas
as experiencing the tears
of the creature giving
you the strenght to live on
for the world can stop
but yet you have to
yet live on
time to explore more options yet to come

♥ I like,very nice Bert

What Queenie added it gives light and hope
and leaves a positive note

Nice write....

Thank God for sunrises though...
To new tomorrows...

I appreciate what Queene wrote. It is ver nice. But the poem is about a love that will never die. None of the things describes in my poem will never happen so love lives for ever.

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i met you in my dreams
wishing upon my last breath
as watching what would be guided
towards me
as love can be so very true
but then in a distant
of the eye love can be taken away
in nothing but a flash
as you tend to know
as facing fear and not sure
of what plans to be ahead
you often walk through
the soak of waters
and learn what has been
given back in the enternity
as love is all around
as you know that love can stay in your heart
in a lifetime
but there is always plenty to give around as
you tend to seek out the reap rewards
and give a better attitude out in life

Bert's right.. Saying dat d things he meant here wl never happen while love lives on. Nice work

Thank you very much Fonomoh.