Topic: Captured By Tears.....
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Tue 06/21/11 01:23 PM
Edited by Up2Us on Tue 06/21/11 01:31 PM


Captured By Tears

Moments as a overture fade into ambiguity.
Smiles become erroneous lies.
Sweet words flow into peculiar emptiness.
Love annihilates a heart, with sweet bitterness.
A slow poison habitually flows into the soul.

Heartache is tenderly captured by tears.

Eternity fades revealing a eclipse of pain.
Amidst a stigma of emotions a tortured martyr.
Nails being driven into the mind of romance.
Forever echoing, waves of remembrance.
Upon solitary shorelines of delirium.

Heartache is tenderly captured by tears.

The stars at night become fragments of a broken heart.
Picturesque sovereign stranger, sieged by yesterday.
Melancholy blue skies, reflect depression inside.
Abandoned castaway, shipwrecked by the promise of love.


Poem:
MHS©Copyright 2011

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Wed 06/22/11 06:13 PM
wow.....way too familiar. shattered bliss, eloquently put flowerforyou flowerforyou

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Wed 06/22/11 06:47 PM
..Far out I love that picture above your write..Nice write by the way...

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Wed 06/22/11 08:55 PM
<-----------------HEY,,,YOU MAKIN FUN OF MY EYE HERE.





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Nice write man,,and very DEEP,,,but very COOL.....

And,,YOU could have used my eye,,I would have lend it to ya,,laugh

OK,,YOURS has a big tear,,,OK,,OK,,,lol:banana:

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Thu 06/23/11 09:51 AM
nicely done...flowerforyou flowerforyou

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Thu 06/23/11 10:14 AM
Wow, very nicely done... it goes on in on, doesn't it?
Like the image too... drinker

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Thu 06/23/11 04:50 PM
Thanks all....flowerforyou

Love truly can be a battlefield comprised mainly of brokenhearted casualties.....spocksmokin

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Thu 06/23/11 07:43 PM
I could feel the emotion captured in this piece, its currently how I'm feeling right.

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Thu 06/23/11 08:13 PM

I could feel the emotion captured in this piece, its currently how I'm feeling right.

Um... 1st post... welcome...

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Thu 06/23/11 08:47 PM


I could feel the emotion captured in this piece, its currently how I'm feeling right.

Um... 1st post... welcome...
Agreed, welcome mspoeticgirl, thank you for commenting with your 1st post on this poem. Time can heal many wounds....flowerforyou Sometimes you have to rise-up out of heartache like a phoenix, and take flight. Peace.....:heart:

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Thu 06/23/11 08:53 PM
Let me say hello to Mz Poet....and like the hands on a clock,,with each tick forward,,we go on and on,,,and on,,,,and although the pain and sometimes the anger stay closed inside,,,its the new changes and frinds who you meet,,that pull you from all that.
May you meet many and have fun here reading and knowing,,your welcomed to stop in ANYTIME!!! Have a goodnight,,,:heart: flowerforyou