Why I love the Rain


It was that moment
when I saw you
dancing
with yours arms stretched out
and your head lifted up;
with your hair falling back ever so slightly
you were too beautiful to continue looking at
so I closed my eyes
and kept the picture within me for all the days of my life

You looked so perfect
spinning
and laughing
as the cool drizzle of rain
caught every ray of sunlight
that decided to dance with you
the temperature
was warm enough to be cool
as your sundress clung close to your body
touching you in places
my hands wanted to experience

The juxtaposition
of the sun shining brilliantly
enough to glisten in the rain
that made love to you
made my soul ache
with a beautiful joy only my eyes cold describe

I remember
sheepishly hiding behind “Hello”
hoping that your smile wouldn’t mind my intrusion;
it was that moment
without knowing you
that I knew I would be in love with you
for all the days of my life

Oooo i love this!! a delight to the visual senses, so nice!!

p.s. probably the first poet to ever use 'juxtaposition', and perfectly!

Heeeey, this is nice. :)

Warm and cozy in the rain,,as love gives level to torment and pain.
May her memories always feel as alive,,,Nice write man..

Very evocative, good imagery, really comes across.

Thank you all . . . I'm seriously glad that you all enjoyed this. Hey Bastet126, I'm just trying to keep up with how well you make everyone see what you feel.

this is me, handing you back the attention, it's your thread and a lovely write. ((but, ty ))