Topic: Where do I start?
goodheart04's photo
Wed 05/25/11 01:24 PM
I wanna write a poem, but I don't know where to start
How about with the love that I've been needing,
And this empty feeling in my heart,
No I can't think about that its tearing me apart,
I need to think of something else,
But where do I start...
Maybe when I lay my head to rest, I'll think of something else,
No I don't wanna do that, because I'll just lay there by myself,
This isn't working its just making me feel worse,
I need to start somewhere else...
Oh man! Look at the time, the day's almost over,
It would be nice to have someone to talk to,
And lay her head on my shoulder,
I could take one look in her eyes
And know that I kept every promise I told her,
Like "I'll NEVER cheat, I'll treat you with respect, you'll never have to worry because I'll be your soldier"...
I want something real,
I don't wanna pretend,
I wanna have someone that I can call my best friend,
I wanna write a new poem, but for now... THE END


Sharris's photo
Wed 05/25/11 01:27 PM
Yes, where to start...you've expressed this beautifully.

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Wed 05/25/11 01:41 PM
Nice....has a Eminem feel on it...smokin