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So I've done a bit of a rewrite. Not sure if its just my area or what. But I don't seem to be able to draw attention from anyone in my area. So take a look and give me suggestions. All constructive criticism is welcome. Have a good day All!
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Edited by
2KidsMom
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Thu 03/31/11 07:39 AM
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I think it's a strong profile.
I think the world of you.You are a very good friend to me. 
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well i perved you, and i didn't like the fact that you are not into oxymorons. no wait, it was onomatopoeia, or was it spiders and snakes. ok, i admit i didn't read your profile, but i'm sure if i could read spanish it would be really nice. i don't care what the mods say about you, i think you rock
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 I've said it before and I'll say it now. I LOVE you guys!! Love my minglers. Thanks for the comments (even you Bulldog)
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Double-perv. Yes, your profile was very powerful. It was almost poetry. Good read. (You are probably screening out the guys who are looking for key phrases like "hot mama" and "want to party" ).
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Edited by
Troublebug
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Thu 03/31/11 08:33 AM
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Double-perv. Yes, your profile was very powerful. It was almost poetry. Good read. (You are probably screening out the guys who are looking for key phrases like "hot mama" and "want to party" ).  thanks artlo. I appreciate the input, You never know if what you write comes out the same way you meant it.
  Did I forget to put those key phrases in there. Guess I'll have to do an edit.
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The Shiki rates this profile a C. My main concern with it is that it is too long. Like some Skikettes I know, it goes on and on (and on and on and on). Keep it short and sweet (like you :)
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Well thanks for your opinion Shiki. But my profile in my opinion is Not that long. But to each his own.
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Troublebug writes:
"Well thanks for your opinion Shiki. But my profile in my opinion is Not that long. But to each his own." If we are speaking about one-eyed Shiki, then it is OK to be extremely long. Your profile is not one-eyed Shiki, and thus, it is too, too long. Quality, not quantity matters. |
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This comment comes from a guy who's profile says everything BUT what he's actually like, or what he's looking for.
 unbelievable. Shiki I've change my mind again I'm starting to lean back towards your obnoxious.
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It's fine TB .. you have gone to some effort!! As you elude to ... 'Just be yourself etc' - i like the bit about continuing to grow, as in 'create urself'.
If it were me i would have left it at "A splendid combination of talent and trouble ..." and let intrigue do its work ... but then that's just me. BTW: Here's another moronic ox to add to the list. "Always remember you're unique...just like everyone else!" 
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I think your profile is nice and tells much about your real personality, which is a good thing. Apart from a couple of minor errors, it's almost flawless. :)
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Thanks Rfah and red_lace. I appreciate the input
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I have been on here for over 5 years and its as good as Ive seen!!!!! U did a great job and no matter WHAT a "certain" person thinks I give U a very strong A!!!!!!!
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This comment comes from a guy who's profile says everything BUT what he's actually like, or what he's looking for. unbelievable. Shiki I've change my mind again I'm starting to lean back towards your obnoxious.
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I have been on here for over 5 years and its as good as Ive seen!!!!! U did a great job and no matter WHAT a "certain" person thinks I give U a very strong A!!!!!!!
Thanks Mikey.  Your such a sweetie!
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Isn't he?One word 2 syllable Awesome.
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