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Hi,I'm brand new to the online dating scene and would love to get some advice on my profile. Thanks!
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Shiki rates this profile a B. Here's why.
1. TOO SHORT. Here is what you write: "I am 54 but of late have felt young again and ready to try the dating scene in hopes of meeting that special someone to share the joys of life with. I'm warm, caring and fun to be with." Well, what about the person for whom you are looking? What do you seek in a man? P.S. Never end a sentence in a preposition. 2. NICE PIC. However, a couple more would be better. You have a nice bod, and beautiful yam yams, but we never really get a sense of what you look like. Still, a solid job for a first crack at a profile. |
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