Topic: Lonely world.
JamieRawxx's photo
Fri 03/11/11 11:20 PM
If you ever came to know my pain
Or drown for a day in my Lonely rain
You would know what its like to suffer in hell
Just hear the tales i have to tell
You may never again pass judgement on me
Even understand why sometimes i flee
Why sometimes i hide when the road gets rough
Or run away when life gets tough
If you spent sixty seconds inside my head
You'd understand why life i dread
If you took a minute to feel what i feel
You would know my pain is real
If you for once choked on my tears
Or had to fight through one of my fears
If you spent a day in my solitude
My nightmares you couldnt elude
You would drop down and pray
To never Again see the things ive seen
Or have to dream the dreams i dream

blackcherryroze's photo
Sat 03/12/11 12:12 AM
Great poem. I enjoyed it quite a lot.

NIKHILKRISHNA's photo
Sat 03/12/11 12:36 AM
I am with u dear-""

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Sat 03/12/11 12:41 AM
Loved your write Jamie..

LAMom's photo
Sat 03/12/11 08:57 AM
flowerforyou

jimz's photo
Sat 03/12/11 10:57 AM
glasses

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Sat 03/12/11 04:27 PM
No, one life, should ever have to feel all that its lived..
This was very nice,,and the heart will heal,,,,,through many more words to release that which lingers still..:heart: :wink: